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Insta-stories

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Summary

With seven words per line, four lines per story, my insta-stories are flash, flash fiction I produced for my instagram account. Once a month I’ll compile them together and see what happens. You can check out my instagram here www.instagram.com/By_BrendonJames 74

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

October “Fear and foe”

Meadow of green, sky of deep blue.

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Bees dart between flowers, humming whilst working.

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Butterflies dance gracefully, mindful of hungry predators.

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A signboard reads “GreenMeadows Estate, coming soon”

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||:and again, loopy Lenny lost his way.

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Pledging he will change, on another day.

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Poor loopy Lenny, never seeing the end.

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His life, looping round and round, again:||

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In my eyes, you are one interpretation.

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Through yours, I’m someone I’ve never met.

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Blinkered by our perspective, actions become unconscious.

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Illuminate my blindness, show myself to me.

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Ripples dance across puddles as rain falls.

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Puddles rise forming pools that flow downhill.

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Streams carry debris into gutters traveling faster.

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Departing from your vision, choices we abandoned.

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Pupils dilate and hairs stand on end.

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Your heart beats faster, fear taking hold.

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Faced with your fate the mind races.

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“Why did I think this wasn’t real!?”

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Violent winds whip around, unrelenting and unforgiving.

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Feet on weak foundations you stand paralyzed.

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Breathless screams muted in the storms wake.

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Witness the end, the full cost due.

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‘Program start, continue scheduled boot up sequence?’

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A choice has presented itself, now decide.

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Others boot up around you, uninspired, unsatisfied.

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Do we follow yesterday or explore today?

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