What is your opinion?
Interesting Story
"This story is off to a great start. The story itself is intriguing, and I'm a huge fan of dystopian novels it seemed right up my ally. The society is already compelling, and I love your casual writing style. There are several errors that will distract readers, but those can be easily fixed. :) **Author notes below."
Cool story, but needs some work
"I just took a look at your story, and I was definitely intrigued. I really liked your writing style in the prologue. It had a lot of draw to it that had me hooked right away. Your take on the apocalyptic future with the "beast" and the "falling" was very interesting. I also think it's cool that you chose to tell the story like the reader is looking through a journal. That's often hard to do, but I think you made it work. The writing itself was a little sloppy. For the most part, your sentences made sense to me, but there were a lot of grammatical errors and places where you used the wrong word. For example, in many instances you used the word "are" instead of "our". So your plot and the writing style you used was great, I just think that you need to try to clean it up a little bit. It was a very good start! I was pulled in right away. Great work!"
