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Patient 367
"After getting past the over lengthy descriptions of the building, It was an amazing story. I just felt you were too descriptive of every little detail. It has an awesome twist and a good character. Never heard one quite like this before. I found the non-distinction between narration and dialog was very difficult to follow, I found myself rereading to make sure it was indeed two separate things. There were several misspelled words and bad punctuation throughout. BUT! an amazing story in itself. I did enjoy. Thank you for sharing. Love to all readers and writers."
What a story!!!
"The description about the place in on point ... Beautifully written.. Would love to read further books from this particular writer"
Great Story
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