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The sheriff

"A lovely story. Really enjoyed it. 🥰"

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Wow love it

"Omg what a beautiful story. I'm so sad it ended. Well done xxx"

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Recommend the read!

"I do recommend the read, great and unique storyline. The ending with Terry was a bit of an anticlimax, was expecting a bit more drama involving her considering how much she was mentioned as a threat. "

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Good

"Overall very good,....There are some missing parts though.... What about Sarah? What is her story? And then there is Indie's father? What about him? "

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JHB

"Loved this story. Amazingly well written and good grammar which I appreciate. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Great job!"

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The Sheriffs Deputy

"Good story but sad in some aspects. "

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Great story!

"I really liked this story. You used proper vocabulary, which is very rare these days, and you didn't drag the misunderstanding for too long like some telenovela. Great work. "

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Tu-gene

"I liked the flow from one scene to another. The author really brings the character to life. I would recommend this book to all sixteen and older I think. The chapters just gets better. Wow. Amazing and so captivating. You just want the story to continue. I love it "

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The mistake of the youth

"Seth's inability to listen to Sarah and his mother really plunged him into unnecessary pain. He thought he was doing good but got burnt in the process "

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Overall good

"Recommended"

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Great plot

"I really enjoyed the story line! The plot was captivating and left you curious, needing to see how it all ends. I found the book to be too steamy, it felt like there was way too much emphasis on sex, I prefer a more subtle love story. "

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