The Dark Streets

Lynne

7 chapters read

Lynne

"Good story but did not like the ending was a bit silly either that or I am stupid."

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The dark streets

"A beautifully written mysterious story.The story line is totally unpredictable.One wants to continue reading on."

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Susan

6 chapters read

It was awesome

"All my friends"

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The dark street

"I like this story it was so good and I really like it can't wait to get to the end"

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wolfie99

6 chapters read

Simply Amazing.

"You need to continue this novel... This novel is just let's say can't be described in words... But I would like to see what happens next.. and what was that thing about her seeing herself as fallen angel and why was her family like that to her ...so many questions... Please continue..."

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Interested

"You changed the name"

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Deepa

7 chapters read

Good but not sure where it's heading to

"Not exactly sure where this is going..like with a ghost, a killer mom n wings.... And a guy whose parents are ok with a random girl staying in .."

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Mou

7 chapters read

Beautiful

"Nice story line"

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"This book has such a great plot! I’m a minor so I skip the lovey-dovey parts but it’s a great book all the same! "

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worldwide

7 chapters read

My angel

"Nice novel"

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The dark Streets

"A nice story with loads of curiosity as the story goes . I will recommend to friends , according to my opinions it deserves this rating. "

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Points of interest

"Howcome the main character's name changes from flare to nylon? And everything is a bit rushed and not round of well. A lot more time could have been put into making sure that the Flow of the book is better and the author is getting a bit confused with active and passives"

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The Dark Streets

"Way to many things didn’t make sense. Who was Nylan? No sense to the ending."

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Disappointing

"Says complete but it is only half finished obviously written by someone young. Nothing wrong with thst but quite childish in soneways. Concept good though"

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