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Vampire High

"Good read ! I suggest taking time to read it😟 !!! ❤️and ✝️🛐s"

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Interesting story

"There were some grammatical errors"

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Vampire high

"This was a beautiful book the plot twists and everything ❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Great

"Its a great book, and great read"

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Vampire High

"Loved the concept behind it because I'm a big vampire nerd. I love stories like this, but it feels more like a Wattpad story than something actually thought out and triple checked. Overall, the plot was good, and the characters were interesting, but I feel like there wasn't enough writing to really put the story together as a "novel". Like, in the middle of the book (roughly) there was a "love interest" switch, you could say. I lost track of who Clementine actually liked and it became really confusing. There were some grammatical errors scattered about, but nothing that a double-check before publishing couldn't fix. My biggest piece of advice, from one writer to another, would be to just re-read before you publish, spell check, make sure everything is how you want it. Also, be careful of writing and then coming back after a while because it's easy to forget where you were and what was happening amongst the characters. Ultimately, the plot line was amazing and the story compelling, I couldn't help but keep reading! I loved the idea of the story, but these little touch-ups would make it even better. Thank you for the exciting read, have an amazing day, and keep on writing! Sincerely, EllishandZooayy"

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Vampire's high

"The book was really interesting but it has a lot of linguistic error "

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