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Deemi

"Beautiful story"

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Milli

"I see a lot of missed words in the story. "

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Rejected but survived

"Started out really well but to finish it on Dreame is a no for me. It is too boring to earn coin there and if you don’t use it fast enough they just take it away! I share all of the stories I read here.... I will NOT be sharing this one! I also encourage authors to keep writing but since you have gone to Dreame you need no such encouragement..... what a shame about this book.... I think I might have enjoyed it"

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Rejected but survived

"It's definitely not a complete story. But it was interesting to read.i wonder what the ending would be, and I wish I could read the full story. Good job. Thank you for sharing 👏 🙏👍 😊 "

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Intriguing

"The storyline is so intriguing "

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Sorry it ended......

"So you get readers excited then turn them on to a paid site, Love IT! 😍"

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Enticing

"I’m intrigued and interested in this book from the very beginning? I don’t wanna stop reading it because I want to read what’s coming next."

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Short and beautiful

"Beautiful and nice story of finding hope in darkest times"

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okay

"This is great so far. in fact, it is wonderful but labeling it as complete is rude and unjust. It is only an excerpt and should be labeled as such. I love it but I am not going to pay to read the rest, when you are using inkitt to support and show a piece of your work. Just pay for an ad to get your work out there. I should honestly report you for basically scamming people."

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Very cute

"Cute story bit felt like it just ended. Boom done."

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DLM

"Good story but would like more,ASAP. Lol. Some grammar and spelling need to be corrected. Had to figure out some sentences due to the placement of words. But all in all I liked the story so far. "

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Love the book very much a friend to read idk tbh

"Love love this book"

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Rejected but survived

"I way the story was arrangedby making me read whatvthe characters say by hemslves"

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Why is this incomplete

"I dislike that the book is no finished. I like the story line that the author has created. Definitely a good novel for those who like a bit of suspense and romance with a touch of uncertainty. "

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Rejected, but survived

"Please update.elizabeth moore.....thank u"

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Lovely

"The author tells us the story of a young girl who is teased by everyone because , firstly she was abandoned by her parents, secondly she didn't even have any family and finally she was rejected by her boyfriend, who it happened that he was not in love with her but just wanted to use her. Unfortunately by trying to commit suicide she ended up in the hands of two loving men, Kaizen and Marcel. So far am enjoying the book, I just want to continue reading reading because I want to know what is going to happen between Rue and Kaizen, are they going to be lovers? Even so it will be good for The to finally find someone who would comfort her and make her forget about all her problems . I cannot wait to see what happens next thou. This book is suitable for people who are eighteen years and above, as long as you can read , write and understand. The book is so interesting , it makes u want to read more to see what happens next, the language used is understandable, the plot is perfect and everything is just on point hence I rated it 5 on everything. "

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Rejected but survived

"So far great just wanting more you do an excellent job thank you much"

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Rejected but survived

"Sehr schön geschrieben. Konnte nicht aufhören zu lesen. Die Frage ist wie geht es weiter ?"

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More

"I'd like to continue on the app I already have please"

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The first thing you need to do is write down the names

"Goodness gracious you have to go to the hospital to get whatever."

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