What is your opinion?
Mob Heiress
"Was a great story. Shows how people who have suffered severe abuse can be strong and prevail through most anything "
Hot hot real badass mad cany stop read yep up author the head mother seem quite but could be deadly the friend got things lock up way up straight
"This book bad gyal thing them no tech check straight no retreat no surrender them no pet no boy out"
Needs Work
"I think this book is stronger than the previous one I read since the plot is a bit more engaging and makes more sense, but the stylistic issues and grammatical issues are the same here as it was in the previous review. I won't got into detail again since my comments would be the same. The main issue is the dialogue. And in this book I specifically noticed that a lot of the verb tenses are incorrect (ex: you say "doesn't know" when it should be "don't know" a lot) I think where this book is stronger is that the characters are a bit more believable. It does follow a common "mafia book" trope, so I think there is room to add some uniqueness here so it's not like every other mafia style romance out there, especially with the tragic past and being sold by her parents etc etc. But, then again, these tropes are tried and true and work for a reason. Overall, I think the technical side needs work, but the plot in and of itself is pretty good. Keep it up and hope this helps!"
Mob heiress
"Alesendra is a very intense character. And very angry. The story simply show that humans can be cruel and that people can react differently to situations."
