What is your opinion?
This book deserves its own anime
"This book is quite the masterpiece. One can tell how carefully it was crafted. Much thought is behind every small detail, and I love it. I like how each chapter seems to bring a new story to the fold whilst slowly but surely integrating those stories in a natural way. The pacing is perhaps the best aspect of this book, which does not take away from the other aspects of it that are also masterfully built, but the progression feels natural, to the point you wouldn't even attempt to question it. The characters are vivid, there's a lot of back and forth between them and the author does a great job of giving tidbits to the reader to keep them wanting more. Lastly the imagery is spectacular. The reader finds themselves instantly immersed into the world the author has created. I have only read the first five chapters or so so far but I'd be hard pressed to find any noticeable flaws in this book. Definitely one of the best works I've had the pleasure of reading so far. Thanks to the author for this masterpiece. It deserves its own anime."
I really enjoyed this. Waiting for more...
"The synopsis was clear and concise, and the story followed suit. The lore in the first chapter perfectly set the precedent of the plot, and each chapter flowed well with this in mind. I love the individual perspectives given by all four characters. In addition to this, you have laid out each of their backstories enough to give the reader context into their persona and individual habits. They each have very distinct personalities. Like I said in one of my comments, the story is equal parts descriptive and pensive. The inner dialogue each character has helps me focus on their thoughts and feelings within the moment, and allows me to foreshadow the path they may take next. The imagery sets my mind free with my own interpretation of this world you've thrown me in, and I absolutely love that. There are VERY few instances where grammar can be questioned, but because this is infrequent, I didn't knock off any points--I feel like that'd be unfair, especially since those are an easy fix. And like I said before, you know what you're doing. Lastly, concerning the plot, I had some questions throughout the story, one example being the father and his son's names, but I know this is a thing many author's do, as I have read many books in my time. Thus, I trusted that these answers would soon be revealed, and they were. Loved that. I thoroughly enjoyed what you put out so far, and I will be coming back for more. Keep it up!"
It is a good storyline and is very imaginative.
"The plot is superbly crafted and I am expecting a long story like Lord of the Rings. The pacing is good too. The way you tell the story from each character’s point of view makes it easier to know what they think about each other. I like how you avoided using Excalibur which we already read about in the stories of Merlin and King Arthur and the explanation the sage gave, which makes one wonder what Sol and Luni could be capable of. I love the idea of twin anything (twin guns, twin knives, twin swords, etc.) The father has renewed hope to restart a quest he has abandoned and the odd part is that this hope comes from his son the younger generation. Normally, it is the older generation that always seeks to make the younger generation do stuff. Well since he decides to go on a quest that has failed so many times it means he has hope that he can succeed. Love always complicates things and I was unsure what Bridget would do since she was in love with Ulrik. On Ulrik’s part, I could not be sure if he would stay true to Bridget. Magnus is very smart but it’s a risk to try to make Ulrik betray Bridget, but if it works it would be superb. Why did you decide to make the sage’s son not see the first battle? He would have learned early enough to let sleeping dogs lie (hahaha). Magnus being an Orc came as a surprise even to me and I loved it. It explained why he was so strong. I wonder what other creatures you have up your sleeve. I just hope the other tyrants would be more terrifying I also found a few things that might need tweaking. First, I feel like the gap in events between chapters 6 and 7 is too wide. Secondly, you do not give vivid descriptions of the surroundings and the characters. For example, I don’t know if Bridget is a pretty chick or a masculine looking female. This story could make a great video game. It reminds me of the video game Final Fantasy Looking forward to the next Dye of Heroes."
