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Good

"I have enjoyed reading this book so far. It has been very good writing and the intimate parts have been very steamy"

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Very erotic

"Fun swzy read. Not boring and a very interesting topic Good writing style and interested in reading more by this aithor."

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Threesomes

"I don’t like the fact, that Sally played Steven. She knew she wanted to have other men . How will this turn out for Steven because I think Sally might leave with Mario."

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A fantastic fantasy

"This story is well written and a very good read. If the story continues it will be a great book. I think Steve should express his thoughts on him being a sissy cuck, in private only but approved guest would of course be welcome to sample him or Sally! I look forward to more from this and hope a series of books/mid length stories featuring all of these characters!! "

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the bull and the cuckold

"i like everything. i will recommend it to my friend. i love this rating because the story were too good"

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Cuckold

"Yes very lively book"

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Updateeee soon

"Please update this book I love the story and i want more of it Anyone plzz suggest where i can get more chapters And i love this book Please update some chapters "

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Interesting

"Not into cuckolding myself, but each to his own I guess"

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The wife The bull & The C

"The story itself isn't half-bad, which makes the rest really unfortunate and quite disappointing. A problem that I constantly seem to run into with literature like this is the lack of emphasis on testing and making sure that everyone is clean going into these encounters, this is how STDs and other diseases spread. But putting that to the side, the bigger issues with stories like this always boils down to consent and just how much consent is ACTUALLY given in these dynamics. When Steve questions Rick on clean-up, indicating that he expects Steve do give him a blowjob after having sex with his wife Sally, this is the first red flag. Putting aside the need for alcohol to be consistently available for these encounters to go smoothly, which implies that without alcohol everyone would be so willing to engage in this behavior. Everyone involved in the encounter should be enthusiastically consenting to the encounter. Even a hesitant yes is not full consent, in chapter 2 there is dialogue between Steve and Rick where Steve says, "Yes I understand and I know what to expect." But later in the same chapter it is shown that Steve actually did NOT know what to expect based on Ricks' words. Rick saying that Steve 'licks my cock clean after you've cum all over it' and Steve questioning that exchange happening is a sign that consent is not completely involved in this dynamic. If humiliation is apart of the relationship and consented to on all sides, then I would have no issue, but it's quite clear that's not what's happening here. The power dynamic that is being created early on creates a problem later on in the story when is again implied that Steve would consented to being anally penetrated by Rick in spite of never having done an enema or anal cleanse (same with Sally). That Steve also would consent to having Alan (another character revealed later) shove his dick in Steve's mouth and take it 'balls-deep'. This plays into a certain narrative about cucks that not only are they comfortable with being humiliated but that most of them like it. Not to mention that no one is unpacking the reality that Rick, Steve and Alan might all be bi or pansexual. Being bi or pansexual is great, but it should be unpacked. Men don't suddenly have sex with other men and not realize something about themselves, especially if they had NEVER done it previously. That might be the reason that Steve and Sally's relationship developed in this way. Steve never realized that he might be bisexual until now. Then there's what I said earlier, the lack of testing and making sure that everyone is safe after these encounters. Because for Rick and Serena (Rick's ex-wife). For them to have sex after Rick then had sex with Sally, Steve and Alan all at the same time, to then have sex with Serena and had have some form of test done and results ready to show that you are clean after that? Red-flag. Additionally, Serena has had her fair share of partners and hook-ups since divorcing Rick, she should be getting tested as well. There's simply not enough care for testing and safety for me in any of these erotica stories. But like I said, the most important thing is consent and making sure that everyone involved is enthusiastic in both giving and receiving it. Not just assuming that everything is fine, or telling characters to 'be quiet' and 'only speak when I tell you to'. This creates an environment where power and consent and precarious and can be manipulated with at any time. It's a dangerous slippery slope that I personally wouldn't play with like that..... "

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Good

"Repetitions thrive all the way"

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