Inkitt
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"Really good"

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Loved this book

"Loved this book❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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La Mafia Gonzalez

"I all ready read the next story was confused at first didn't realize I had read the out of order oops still great story Thank you "

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La Mafia Gonza’lez

"It’s a nice story and I enjoyed reading it "

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Love!!

"Some grammar and spelling mistakes but I am obsessed with this story. Thank you author!!"

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Great

"Lovely story. Beautifully written. "

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Love itttt😍😍😍😍

"Go little rockstar"

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LA Mafia Gonzalez

"Very nice read. All the good times make up for the sad parts cause they made me cry. Keep up the great work and write more stories for us. 💖💖💖"

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La Mafia Gonzalez

"Loved the book"

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La mafia Gonzalez

"It's just an amazing book has an amazing upbringing and plot it's just genuinely a good book to read"

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Amazing😍

"I love ittt😍😍😍 looking forward the next chapters🥰"

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Perfecto

"Beautiful storyline. Good progression of the romance. Very relatable"

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La Mafia Gonzalez

"I really love that the whole family loves Valeria. It’s so sad that her dad was killed by her mom but I am proud of her reaction. Now she is a member of the mafia. She will be a good partner for Lorenzo. Sometimes the spelling is off and I needed to stop and reread some parts to figure out the meaning. I also sometimes lose track of who is speaking. The quotation marks are not there to indicate the speaker. It is a good story"

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Love at first sight

"Nice romance story. "

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Too short

"The chapters feels too short and too cut to cut. I wish they were a tad bit detailed. The story is nice but it feels empty. It’s like reading a summary instead of a novel. "

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