Nice beginning of a book

"The story is developing in an interesting way. I like that the author is building to the main character’s discovery of her magical powers. The suspense of the Count and is knight being up to something that hasn’t been revealed yet. I’m looking forward to a few more chapters. I would like the author to continue to expand on the characters. It might be interesting if there were a flashback to her childhood, only if it pertains to the developing story. "