"The Wrongdoer"

"Interesting story, flows fast and well written. The Chapters read laid out the foundation quite well, and the story and plot moved together forming opinions on the main character Mike, his bully adversary Bradley and the Girl both boys in the story liked........excellent start. There is some confusion of 1st person and 3rd person in the story changing back and forth at times. Otherwise, fine work and a story a lot of people can relate too.."