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Another good book

"Going to go check out some more of your writing. Thanks author!"

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The Old House

"I have read two books written by Lasergraph before, After the Storm and The Cashier, they were not only well written but the plot was enthralling and the writer was able to hold the interest of his readers right through. This one, however, is in a class of its own. Absolutely gripping! It holds ones interest and keeps one in edge, guessing every moment. It’s a page turner and unputdownable. I simply loved it. I look forward to more mystery books from you…👍👍"

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The old house

"So well written that it was hard for me to put it down.Congratulations to the author,waiting for more."

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The Okd House

"Fascinating story. Was a great story to read and to find a read the journal of different owners and the haunting that went on. I believe that hauntings do happen. Glad they solved it and the ghost was finally able to rest"

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The old house

"It was a good story interesting at times. But the narration style could have been better. Repetition of many sentences and scenes was not praise worthy The plot is interesting but the narration could have been better. Ending could be elaborated. "

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a story of strong women coping with their personal burdens

"The story started off strong. It had a touch of drama and mystery to it that could pique one’s interest to delve deeper. Although it became repetitive, I still wanted to find out how things would unfold. But I fell that the story could have been made shorter. There are other elements to the story, aside from the mystery surrounding the house. Overall, this is a good story."

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