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Graceful and Captivating

"This was an endearing continuation. I loved, how vividly Cordrut's thoughts and feelings were addressed. The writing style greatly conveyed them, along with the little glimpses into his past. It was fascinating to see his relationship with Balthazar, with Lenuta, the love he had for Esther and how he had tried to cut ties with Liviu. Honestly, Liviu's and Cordrut's confrontation was amazingly portrayed. I adored that chapter; it also made me more interested in Liviu, with how much varied emotion he had showed then. The final chapter was a satisfying one. The coincidence with the same dates gave a mysterious aura, so I'm curious now - will need to read more... (Before I forget, the final poem was charming, I adored it, reminded me of romanticism, idk.) In the end, I must say that this was a really enjoyable novel, my only advice would be to recheck punctuation. Some parts in the narrative were a bit harder to understand, not as much because of the writing style, but for missing clauses. Maybe that was just me, so please take that with a grain of salt. That should be all, I suppose. ^^ Sincerely thank you to the author for this delightful novel! "

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