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Hardship and Family

"Life changes when a child is born into a family. It becomes challenging when the parents die leaving an uncle in charge. This story is based on love but highlights dysfunctional behaviors. The girl has to be strong to survive what life keep throwing at her."

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Gainful Wishes

"Tough to read. Abuse by a relative is sometimes tough to read but know it happens but can be overcome by time. Love by family and friends can help reduce the trauma and finding true love can help"

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It’s Alan fault sorry

"So he knows ken is abusive but still let en girl stay with him. It’s his fault "

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