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Wow that was amazing hope there's more to that story.

"Because It felt more realistic then more books. God job to the writer ;)"

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Nice

"Like it. Nice story"

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Steamy

"Hot and steamy!"

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Jjjjj

"Very good!!! Can't wait to finish the story!!!"

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Amazing, but unsatisfying ending

"I wish M had sex with Adam. "

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Bob 147

"Very well written and subtle intones that leaves me expectant "

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So far so 👍

"I believe that this writer has the potential to become a great writer. With the punctuation and grammar adjustment this book has the potential to be great "

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