Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Great storyline

"This book was a pleasure to read."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Good book

"Like the storyline "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Amazing

"Need more of this."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I don’t remember

"Good flow and orginazation "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I like it

"I like the story and the plot, but the grammatical errors can be annoying."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Great

"It has a Good plot. Also very Good characters. Is a really Nice mystery. Very original!!! A Great new story!! "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Very Unique in setting so far and the character has a feeling like it actually someone actually talk to somebody

"I Like was about the unique Writng but what I actually hate the most Maybe is the kinda of the story line a bit"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I’m hooked

"I am really enjoying this so far. I can’t wait to see what happens. I think the character development is fantastic, and I love how she is just starting to realise how beautiful she is. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Great story

"A plus story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Miss

"Tension and plot accurately paced"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Beautiful Writing

"Before I start this review I would like to start out and say I have an implicit bias, I'm not too big on fantasy. I usually like stories rooted in the real world because I am able to empathize with the characters more. However, when I first began to read this I was immediately hooked by the author's use of words and style of writing. The author writes so eloquently. The words carefully describe a different world where royalty and all kinds of different fantasies exists. I want to keep reading not just for the plot, but for the writing itself!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Good

"Good so far "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Thrilling

"It's simply amazing...it's thrilling to see what happens next...I hope kyro and Alia end up together in this adventure.."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Review

"i really like the story. Especially that you write in first person and you are very descriptive with the gowns/settings/and people. I look forward to reading a possible sequel to this."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Blood Dragon

"It's starting to get interesting. I enjoy reading this."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Interesting

"Interesting read"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation