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The Christmas Wish

"I cried so much. Sad tears and happy tears. Just wished the stoey was longer. Would've loved to see Luke put his sister in her place!!!! Brilliant writing ❤️"

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A roller coaster of a read

"This is such an emotional read that has moved me to tears several times. The writing is so good that I feel as though I’m living the story with the characters."

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The Christmas wish

"I liked the story, sometimes some things and reactions are not very logical and it need some editing, but a good read in the Christmas season. "

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Beautiful Story!

"I completely loved it. The plot and details were on point. Amazing job! God bless our troops!!!"

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The Christmas wish

"That was such a good story ♥️ I read it straight through to the end, I just couldn't look away❤️ Thanks so much for sharing ♥️"

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Cute story

"Awsome writing & plot"

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Just wow

"Fantastic story of falling apart and coming together again"

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Omg

"I have literal chills running down my arms. You did a beautiful job. Showing the good the bad and the ugly of what a military family goes through."

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The Christmas Wish

"It is a very good story. I liked the characters, the writing style and the plot. We need more chapters to see if they find Luke and bring him home. The author did a great job and I hope to read more by her. "

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Christmas Story

"Yes I would tell my friend about this story "

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