What is your opinion?
Very good, creative writing
"I enjoyed reading these short stories. A variety of scenarios sparks the imagination and puts you in the story. I'll definitely keep following and reading more."
Seductive one shots
"Very interesting stories. Some are a different but, holds a reader’s interest. Great job "
Amazing!
"Very very intriguing - looking forward to reading the next the DJ p2 chapter! "
Amazing
"I love this book so much 🙌🏽 amazing writers "
Good!
"It certainly gets the job done. My only criticisms is it jumps around a lot, you use separators sometimes where there shouldn't be. Like in the hog tie one he's telling her he wants to do this then suddenly divulging his trauma and crying and I was like woah wtf where'd this come from. I feel like you should use time jumps sparingly in erotica because sex is all about staying present, so pulling someone away and jumping around doesn't facilitate that feeling very well. I would try to have no more than 2 time jumps/separators in each one shot. Furthermore, each piece of dialogue that comes from separate people needs to be it's own line. This way, you don't confuse who is talking. There were a few grammar mistakes, but nothing awful. I think overall it does what it's supposed to do and the stories in and of themself are interesting. I also love the emphasis on consent! I read so many eroticas where consent is purposefully made to be gray or someone doesn't care and they sexualize the fact that there's not consent and I despise those stories, so thank you for doing the right thing and depicting hot sex as how it should be: completely consensual. Overall, good job, I would just work on those time jumps because that's the main gripe I had. Keep it up!"
