What is your opinion?
Gripping Fantasy
"The author has a passion for their craft and that shines through in their work! The dialogue is expertly written and the author has a way with their words that creates vivid pictures in the minds eye. The pacing is great and not once did I feel the story moved to fast or slow and will easily keep the readers attention as the flip through the digital pages. I look forward to reading more and following along this whimsical journey."
Amazing fantasy
"You’ve got a skill for world building and descriptive language. Your writing is very clear and captivating, and I love your use of colors to give the readers details and provide a good crisp picture of the world and the characters. Your use of strong language also adds to the charm of your stories. Keep writing you’re doing great 😊 "
Dragonkin
"So far, it's looking rather hopeful. I'll give threes pros and three cons as well. Pros: The chatacters clearly have wants and goal, which are often at conflict with one another Your English is beautiful. I have to marvel at your ability to use such a blunt tool in such a romantic way. The MC has a personal stake in the plot as she lost her mother to the baddies. Cons: The plot, while seemingly well-developed, is a tad cliché. I am willing to believe you'll put a spin on it. The dialog is sonetimes too formal, namely between Remial and Basch as they have been friends for decades or centuries. I can't really comment on your grammar, but I noticed some missing apostrophes. So overall, I'd say this has potential. I'm here for Adaya. She's a clever cookie. Adaya is certainly the selling point for me. I will absolutely be coming for more. Andy Weird "
