What is your opinion?
A Fun-Upbeat Tale...With Music!
"This story has a great concept to me. Being a high school student who's into music, I found this story to be quite enjoyable for a lighthearted audience, which is great considering all of the dark things happening worldwide! There are a couple issues with formatting, but that can easily be fixed! I can't wait to read more from this author. :) **Notes for Physicalreality in the comments. :)"
Fun but a little cheesy.
"I read to episode three, and I was definitely intrigued, but it's kind of going the way I expected it to, with the boy stumbling across the guitar and the enigmatic Mr. Music, and the mysterious and dangerous young woman. It's pretty predictable thus far. I think the story would be more interesting if you built the characters more from the beginning and made them more unexpected. I like the idea of the hundred years and the chosen warriors and such, but I found the execution kind of cheesy. Also, I have to ask, is this mean to be a movie script? The formatting was a little strange. I didn't change the rating because of it, but I was curious why it was being written differently. If this is a screenplay or a script, you may want to mention that in the teaser so the reader knows what to expect. The writing was good, but there were some typos and grammatical errors that need to be taken care of. All in all, it's a good start, but I did think it was a little stereotypical. I hope this helps. Good work!"
