Author Note
Hello all,
I am rewriting Vinland. It will no longer be called Vinland: Anoana and there will be a lot of changes. Most of these changes will have to do with most of the characters within the first 3 chapters before we get to Alvis. I have gotten amazing feedback from many readers and on top of that I was able to step back for a few months and reenter the writing process with a fresh and clear mind. I am also working on two more writings but I will be slow on their updates as I get Vinland in order.
I will start making changes on my other platforms once I get done here on Inkitt. I will also post on my wall. The goal is to have this book finished officially by April of 2024 and hopefully be published sometime this year in 2024.
Thank you for your time and patience it truly means a lot to me!
ALSO TO ADD:
the chapters will be a bit smaller. The goal is to have a max word count at 2k to 2.5k. This will create enough free time for myself and will help me get more chapters in.
Excellent opening sentence! (Although 'almost as if' in the first sentence and 'almost as if' in the second hit me upside the head a little bit!) 'Sounds from all around danced with one another' - lovely metaphor but sounds of what? When I don't get to hear the sounds they don't mean nearly as much, even with the dancing. 'It seemed like a small cabin' - I'm confused as to how the cabin fits in with the pounding hooves and did it seem, or was it? (I always encourage writers in this because I need to remember to do it - have you read the piece out loud? Easiest/cheapest way I've discovered to find clunky dialogue, unnecessary words, etc) People are rushing and screaming but I have no idea what's actually going on. A fire? A battle? A kidnapping? There's a 'fog of war' problem for me in this so far.