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Their forbidden Desire
"The storyline is good so far Two things. 1) Would have liked to know a bit more about her dad. 2) Why is she weak and I believe she's in high school but she sounds like she is much younger (she cries about everything and can't defend herself from that other boy's advances.) For a while there I thought Cyril and his dad were shifters the way they were able to read each other so quickly. "
Their forbidden desire
"Great read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Forbidden love
"It’s a nice little story I know it’s a story so please don’t moan the brother is a bit cringy "
Theire forbidden desire
"I like the story very much."
