Inkitt
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Temptation of mine

"The story gives me butterflies! It's a different kind of romance "

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Temptation

"Loved the part till now and ready to keep reading 😊😋"

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Idk

"I'm just trying to read the next chapter. Not sure why this is required. I haven't even finished the story so I don't know if I would recommend it or not. It's okay so far. Not really into guys who feel a woman is his possession. "

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Temptation of mine

"I really enjoyed your story. Although Russell was not a likable character, I was glad Daniel finially got her. She needs to appreciate a good man. "

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Temptation of mine

"I like the author's creativity as plot thickens"

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Confusing age of the minor

"I am thoroughly confused about the female lead Russell's age. Is she 17, 18 or 19? In most of countries 18 is the age of becoming an adult, and 19 in a few. So technically she can't be a minor if she is 18 or 19. "

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Temptation of mine

"Nice book. Needs improvement in grammar and needs more character development "

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