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The missing person

Summary

There was a girl called April and she went on a camping trip with her family but what happened the first night is sad

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

One day I was woken up by my dad shouting to me saying "APRIL GET UP GET READY AND GET PACKED BECAUSE WE R GOING CAMPING!!" he screamed up at me. My family is rich so I was really excited I got packed and I ran downstairs and chucked my suitcase in the car. By the time we got there it was dark and it was 5pm. My dad said to stay in the car while he and mum put the tent up our tent was like a castle it was small on the outside but huge on the inside. It took dad 1 hour to put it up. I ran to my bedroom and fell asleep for 5 hours. At 2am I was woken up by a sound like someone was trying to break into a car. I ran outside and someone was trying to break in our car I shouted " HEY WHAT DO U THINK U R DOING! " I shouted angrily. The person ran I chased after them they took me to a forest even though I have a phobia of forests I chased after them. By the time I got to the middle of the forest I was tired and I lost the theif. I started crying and I shouted " HELP IM LOST AND SCARED!" I screamed and I started crying I felt a hand on my shoulder and I looked up to see my best friend Lucas " omg Lucas I'm so glad u r here" I said while hugging him he said " what r u doing in a forest I know u have a phobia of forests so what r u doing?". I explained everything that happened and he was so supportive and I asked him " do u know the way out of here? ". He said no " but how did u find me? " He said " I heard Ur scream so I ran I knew u were in the forest". Suddenly we heard a noise it sounded like a wolf we screamed and ran them I suddenly stubbed my toe. I didn't stop running I had a stitch but I didn't stop running. I ran streaming in fear and in pain....

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