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What is your opinion?
Love me like this
"I am enjoying the company of this book. I wake up in the wee hours of the morning to indulge. I can't put it down...l am addicted"
A review to your first chapter
"Hey dear, I've seen your story so far. If you're writing this for fun, the it's okay. But, if you're writing to become an author. You need to improve it. You have many dialogues but less scenes that's why, scene is confusing, who is telling what… people don't like to read mundane tasks, try to crop it short anc try to add scenario in the story. "
