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What is your opinion?
The black leaf
"I enjoy the character of Mika though i'm wondering what they think about all this. I hope you expand more on what their actual feelings are as so far they are so focused on their task as to be more a narrative force than a character."
The Black Leaf
"Its good, a very easy read because I was able to get into it. Intrested in the next chapter, even doing a D&D session with this lore and background sounds fun. A few grammar mistakes but still a good read."
The Black Leaf
"I very much like the story content, the twist, the expression and style. It could benefit from proof-reading/editing for a couple typo's and incorrect word usage. All-in-all, it is enough to keep me reading the story. It successfully hooked me. :)"
