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Collection of short stories.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chipped

It all happened too fast. I think I died. From the beginning to the end everything was a mess.


I woke up in a normal living room with a square table full of foods. I dont really remember how I got there since it all started and I was already standing up. There are four chairs around the table with three people talking and laughing with each other.


I can't see their faces. It's like a blur, like my mind can't keep up with the right memory so it was remained blurred.


As I scanned the room there was nothing else. There was no walls or at-least I think theres none. It's just an empty space a white room with a table.


There was three people with me I'm not sure how old they are since they have blurred faces. I'll call them 1,2,3.


I looked at 1 and saw that his hand was gone. The others doesn't seem to mind it and he doesn't seem to be in pain. I continue scanning to the next person,2. His head was gone. But again everyone was still laughing and It's like nothing is happening


I stepped back a few steps because of the shock. They all suddenly stopped laughing. They slowly looked at my direction like they have just noticed me.


They made me feel like they just realized that I don't belong there. They all slowly got up and walked towards me. I can see them disappear piece by piece.


It's like they're being chipped away but they don't feel anything or they don't care about it. I stepped back more


3 suddenly ran towards me. I closed my eyes thinking it would get me. But nothing happened. 3 disappeared It's like the more they move the more they chipped away.


1 and 2 are also disappearing. And my mind couldn't handle the shock and I fainted.


I woke up in a room with a square table full of food. There was 3 people laughing and I got the feeling of DE JA VU.


End

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1. Chipped
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