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You are a beautiful person!

"I hope to see more of your honesty in your future writings! Keep up the honesty! It is what makes you beautiful!"

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"Looking for Nothing"

"Silvia, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, experiences and soul with the world. I wish you the best on your continued journey in self expression, reaching your journeys goals and finding the answers that all life is searching for and then, through life itself, the end is now, just the beginning.............well done Silvia....KEEP writing and kEEP sharing. Sometimes a flower blooms when a person least expects.......you are blooming.... One thought if i may..........you might want to edit your writing a bit more, for errors, sentence structure and Grammar............ which will allow your work to flow more smoothly............This also can help on the style of writing to enhance your points of view for the reader to fall in love with your works. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, memories, pain and joy...............love to hear more from you.......... william elliott https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive.............Review my book. Take care"

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