What is your opinion?
This was really impressive!
"This was really well written and had me on the edge of my seat throughout! The twist at the end was expertly done as well! For just being a short story there was alot of passion in the writing and it was very evident from the start. This could very well have been a full novel! It felt reminiscent of the "Goosebumps" books for me. There were some small errors throughout but these had no impact on the writing itself. Really well done! Keep up the great work!"
Nice 👍🏻
"The idea of the story itself is very interesting and could be expanded upon in a way the creates an amazing plot and characters. Adding some details and descriptive language can really get a reader invested in what you have here. Overall, I think it needs a little touching up but it’s an interesting idea with lots of potential. "
