Amazing!

"I'm writing this review at three chapters, so I can't comment too much about the plot since obviously it's in its begging stages but so far it's amazing. You've created Noah to be both sympathetic while leaving room for us to root for Elias. Your writing is impeccable, very well curated - good descriptions. It elicits emotion, which is the most important thing in a story. The only thing I might change is the intimate scene between she and Noah, it goes by very quickly (which I think was your goal in some capacity, but if it is going to be done in like less than a minute, Freja shouldn't finish - I also think that might add to the point your trying to convey -> Noah isn't putting the effort in anymore) Other than that, I loved everything. The dialogue is believable, I'm excited to see her confrontation with Serena, there's a good element of mystery with her cutting her lip/breaking the glass that separates this from other stories of this nature. Usually when I write reviews, I don't finish the stories - but this one I will certainly be anxiously awaiting each update."