His Eyes by Nandinii at Inkitt
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HIS EYES

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Summary

A short and beautiful poem about the love in his eyes ❤️. But later when she fell in love too he was with someone else.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Nandinii
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

His eyes <3

When everyone was busy looking masterpiece

You were staring at me


Yes boy!

Its you


Who bring back spring

And give me wings


When no one noticed me

It was your eyes who always did

You made me that happy kid


Your small brown eyes , never lies,

always whispers , mines

Isn't it nice?


Though our lips never moved

Your eyes had always talked with mine

You made me the moon , which shine bright all the night

All those midnights were not bad

And I was no more sad

Those eyes always give me hope

And tie my heart with rope

Uff ! What is this ?

Daydream or your eyes ' love?

Those eyes which makes me shy

Don't notice me anymore , why?


~NANDINI

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