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The Silence of The Thorns

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Summary

In the small town of Moor Creek, everyone knows never to enter the forest after dark. Something called the Ogros lives there, and the townspeople leave rotten apples at the tree line to keep it fed. Sixteen-year-old Maya thinks it's just a story. Tired and cold, she takes the forest shortcut home instead of the hour-long road around, and she steps right over the apple at the edge of the trees. As the crickets go silent and a slow, steady thump closes in behind her, she realizes the legend was never just a story. And no one in Moor Creek is coming to look for her.

Genre
Horror
Author
MakaylaB
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Silence of The Thorn

Everyone in Moor Creek had a story about the forest.

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The old men at the feed store told it with their hats in their hands. The women at church told it in lowered voices, as if the trees might be listening. Even the little kids knew it, passing it along on the playground like a dare they were all too scared to take.

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Never go in after dark.

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Because something lived there. It had a name, though people only said it quietly: the Ogros. It slept through the day in the rotten heart of some old tree. But when the moon hid behind the branches, it woke, and it walked. It never ran. It never had to. It only followed the sound of a living heartbeat, one steady step at a time, until it was close enough to whisper.

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I smell you.

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That was what it said, they claimed. Right before.

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My grandmother used to leave a rotten apple at the edge of the trees every autumn, set down carefully on the dead soil. She hummed while she did it, the same four low notes every year, as though the apple needed to be sung to. "So it'll have something to eat besides you," she said, and she never laughed when she said it. Half the town did the same. You could see them along the tree line in October, bruised and brown, crawling with flies.

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I used to roll my eyes at them. Grown adults, feeding a fairy tale to the dirt.

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"You laugh now, Maya," my grandmother would say, setting down her apple. "Wait until it's your turn to hear it."

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I was sixteen, far too old to be scared of a story meant to keep little kids in bed. So I laughed, and I never left an apple of my own, and I did not believe a word of it.

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The night I went in, I was tired, and I was cold, and the road was long.

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Going the proper way, around the forest and along the county road, took a full hour. Through the trees, it was fifteen minutes. Fifteen minutes and I'd be home, out of these wet shoes, done with the whole awful day.

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I stood at the edge for a while. I'll admit that. There was an apple there, right at the tree line, half-eaten and soft, with pale worms moving in what was left of it.

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I stepped over it.

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Stories, I thought. Just stories.

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The silence came first.

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I didn't notice it the way you notice a sound. I noticed it the way you notice a clock has stopped: a moment late, when the absence finally had weight.

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The crickets were gone. Not faded, not drifting off one by one the way they do at the end of summer. They had stopped, all at once, as if a hand had closed over the whole forest's mouth.

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The moon hid behind crooked black branches, and the little light that got through lay on the ground in pieces. There was no wind. A single leaf hung in the air in front of me, turning slowly, and did not fall.

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The air tasted wrong. Sweet and wet, like fruit left too long in the sun.

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I took a step, and my footsteps sounded too loud. Each one seemed to ask a question the dark was in no hurry to answer. The back of my neck went cold. Not from the wind, because there was no wind.

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Somewhere ahead, the dark felt thicker than it should.

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Thump.

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I felt it before I heard it. A tremor in the soles of my feet. A ripple crossing the black water of a puddle beside the path.

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I told myself it was my heart.

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Thump.

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My heart did not beat like that.

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Thump.

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Steady. Unbothered. Too calm to belong to anything that was afraid.

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My grandmother's voice came back to me, certain and quiet. It never runs. It never has to.

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I ran.

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The thorns tore at my arms and the roots snatched at my ankles, and the dark swallowed the path behind me until I couldn't have told you which way was out. Blood roared in my ears, loud enough to drown out the footsteps.

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Almost.

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Behind me, something groaned. Something dragged. Something breathed, wet and close.

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I saw the hollow tree through a gap in the branches, a split trunk rotten down its middle, and I didn't think. I crawled inside and folded myself into the dark of it and pressed both hands over my mouth. Even my breathing felt too loud. I held it until my chest burned.

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Thump.

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Closer.

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Thump.

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Closer.

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The bark trembled against my back. A fine dust sifted down from above and settled on my face, and I didn't dare wipe it away.

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Then the footsteps stopped.

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Silence. Not the empty kind. The kind that listens.

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And then, on the other side of the bark, something began to hum.

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Four low notes.

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I knew them. I had heard them every October of my life.

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Hhhhhaaaaah…

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A breath crept through the wood, warm and sour, curling in through the cracks and around my ankles, up my legs, like a hand feeling its way along my body.

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Then a voice. Deep as a grave. Soft, and warm as a welcome.

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"I smell you."

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Don't breathe, I thought. Don't move. Don't—

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Something slid across the opening of the hollow.

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An eye.

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It was enormous. Jaundiced, threaded with black veins that pulsed beneath its skin. The pupil swelled and shrank, searching the dark, drifting over the walls, over the rot, over my shaking hands, until it found me.

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It stopped.

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Behind the eye, something began to smile.

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Its lips stretched too wide, too slow, until the corners split with a wet crackle. Crooked teeth spilled out of the dark, some long, some broken, all of them glistening red. The smile kept going, long after a mouth should have stopped.

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"Got you."

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The tree burst apart around me.

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A hand closed around my body, slick and hot, its fingers sinking into my ribs until one of them cracked. Then another. I screamed. I clawed. My nails snapped against bark, and then against meat, and it did not flinch. It did not even seem to notice.

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It lifted me, gently, up to that grinning, split-open face. Its breath filled my mouth, thick and sweet and rotten.

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And I understood.

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In Moor Creek, when someone walked into the forest after dark, the town lit a candle in every window the next night, and no one went looking.

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No one was coming.

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No one had ever been coming.

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My hands fell still.

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My body went soft in its grip.

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One tear slid down my cheek. Warm. The last warm thing. It dropped away into the dark below.

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The jaws opened.

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In the hollow of the dark, a girl's scream was cut in half.

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Then there was only the sound of it. Wet tearing. The snap of small bones. A crunch, and then another. Something warm running down a chin and dripping onto the soil.

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Then the forest was quiet.

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At the edge of the trees, the rotten apple lay where it had always been. Half-eaten. Forgotten. Beside it, a small red stain soaked into the dirt, and a single tear shone next to it for a moment, and was gone.

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Far away, the crickets began again, one at a time, as if nothing had happened.

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The next night, the windows of Moor Creek glowed with candles.

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And somewhere deep in the dark, satisfied and unhurried, something licked its teeth.

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Chomp.

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