Please free your trope goats.
Dear Author,
I am sorry but WHY? Why did you write this story with no original worldbuilding, character building, or plotting?
I love werewolf books too, but this one needs so much work that it barely made it to my Ch5 DNF Limit. (I did start Ch 6 because Ch 5 was so short but I did not finish it, the cringe was too much.)
There are so many problems I don't know where to begin. Please Free Your Trope Goats and only keep a few. Clichés and Tropes are like strong spices, aka to be used very sparingly for flavor, no more than 3-5 per book, not per chapter. Save the Cat, Romancing the Beat, The Heroine's Journey, and So You Want To Write Fantasy are the craft books where you need to start. For Ch 6 - The Beginner's Basic Guide to Writing Erotica on Medium will help take the cringe out, and you might consider trigger warnings. I am not going to go into anything about the grammar, punctuation, or misused words like crowed instead of crowd in Ch 1. Technical writing is hard to master.
Good Luck on your writing journey, sorry I couldn't finish your story.
Read the story now