Forever Will I Ship

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could write more.

It was very entertaining. You should write more and further your story don't leave something like this too open. Write another chapter or two show what happens after the fight in the morning.

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awesome

amazing! I hope you make this a series. the plot was awesome as were the characters but it seems to me Percy didn't do much fighting or other wise. Can't wait to read your next book!

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Okay So far I love this story, but please tell me it's not over! I'm still a bit NEW to this site so it's not over is it!?!

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I'm really not much for writing reviews so I would say that the writing and the plot are super and I would enjoy reading more of your work!

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