Kelly Reigner

Alpha Cyrus

My only suggestion would be to spot check the random usage of the capital letters in the middle of a sentence or some missing punctuation. It just helps the story read smoother. I will check back when you have a few more chapters complete ( I am only able to see 2 so far)

Creative Conspiracy at its best!

H.R. Kemp delivers a conspiracy thriller that will keep you tuned in to the very end. She created a story packed with corruption, abuse of power both domestically and politically that one would feel it has been ripped from the headlines of any major paper. She even manages to weave in a tad of unexpected romance along the way.
Kemp's writing strength is apparent in her ability to bring the reader to the foreign country she is intricately describing but also fashions her array of characters in such a way that we can find ourselves despising Prime Minister Wrogarth with such ease and cheering on Shelley's surprising journey of love.

Greed, power and good triumphing over evil will not disappoint you in Deadly Secrets. H.R. Kemp's writing is clean, she has an attention to detail that is impeccable and should not be overlooked.

A Fictitous Attribution

Young and Promising Author!

A catchy title is like accessorizing an outfit~details make or break it. The title pulled me in right away. As the story unfolds, imperfect characters come to light which makes it more realistic. Just when you think you know who it is - the author enters a new character. My only constructive feedback was for small change regarding details of how Sarah dies. I will read more from this author with great potential.

Cursed with Oblivion

Solid start~ I felt I could connect to Darcey. More importantly, the details made me feel present. I smelled the coffee!