Although there’s only one chapter, I can already tell that this story is going to exciting with really likeable characters! Hella is really cool so far, I quite like her brazen personality and values and ideals, she seems intelligent and thoughtfull.
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Also, Brishan seems like a really interesting character! I love the way he speaks and how he’s logical but also seems to have a wild side which I’d love to get to know more about!
It was a nice first chapter, setting the scene of the environment it’s set in really nicely and going in to Hella’s trading matters too which I think is really interesting btw 😧😊
Overall it sounds like a very interesting and adventurous story! Great start, I can’t wait to see where this goes 😊 keep writing x