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Welcome! 💗 Sara and Selena 🌻

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Wow

I really really really enjoyed reading this, its sooooo funny, witty and engaging !!! The characters are absolutely hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣 but they also have another side to them. It’s such a fun and exciting read, with lots of laughter 😊😊😊😊

Really enjoyed it, I was literally laughing and smiling the entire time 😂

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Incredible

Wow! I’m seriously in love with this book and will definitely be reading more when the next chapters are released 😧

Ok already hooked, Amelia’s situation is honeslty so saddening 😞 I feel so bad for her 😩 but I can’t wait to see where this goes and what she does with her last two years of life! It’s such a hard thing to accept 😞 I knew someone who only had a while to live and it was horrifying for her because she kept wondering when she was going to pass. I really can’t wait to read more!

You set up the scene really nicely! No unnecessary details or anything, just perfect which really hooked me - it’s more exciting this way! You jumped straight into the story which is amazing because you made it work so well with good explanations 👏🏻

The only thing I would pick up on is grammar, there are a few mistakes but they don’t really affect the enjoyment for the story hahah, but maybe you should run a quick grammar check! Or get someone who’s into this sort of thing to check it for you? There’s lots of people who like doing this sort of thing 😊 best of luck!

Really good job and I can’t wait for the next chapter ! Keep writing 💜

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Exciting

Really hooking and exciting! The storyline is interesting with all the characters and Cat is such a sweetie! Enjoyable read ! 😊 x

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Exciting!

Really interesting story line and characters! It jumps straight in to the action which is really exciting but I also feel like you could slow it down a little! You can do this by having longer chapters just to explain the storyline a little more, but it’s still very gripping and fast paced!

There are a few grammar mistakes which perhaps you could send it to someone to edit or to look over? 😊 I’m sure there are plenty of people willing to!

It’s a very lovely written story so far, your descriptions are really beautiful!!! I’m also really liking Ray and feel incredibly bad for her and SUPER angry on her behalf 😭 Dark is also a very interesting character and I would love to learn more about him!!! I feel that the relationship between the two but I’m only three chapters in so perhaps you explain things more to make it clear, but I would just recommend slowing the pace with their relationship since I think it’s a little too fast! But they are super cute!!! 😉😉

I’m excited to find out exactly what happened to Ray and what will happen between her and Dark 🤔 I really love your writing style! You really make Dark’s house sound really warm and cosy and convey his kindness perfectly!

Great job, lovely writing 😊 I wish you all the best! x

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Exciting start!

Although there’s only one chapter, I can already tell that this story is going to exciting with really likeable characters! Hella is really cool so far, I quite like her brazen personality and values and ideals, she seems intelligent and thoughtfull.

Also, Brishan seems like a really interesting character! I love the way he speaks and how he’s logical but also seems to have a wild side which I’d love to get to know more about!

It was a nice first chapter, setting the scene of the environment it’s set in really nicely and going in to Hella’s trading matters too which I think is really interesting btw 😧😊

Overall it sounds like a very interesting and adventurous story! Great start, I can’t wait to see where this goes 😊 keep writing x

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Different!

This book is very different from anything I’ve ever read before so I went in with a blank, clear mind!

First of all. I was hooked by the use of Irish and the beautiful descriptive language, you do both of these really well! It’s really interesting to learn more about Irish culture this way and how the boys deal with it, like the whole speak English or Irish dilemma! I liked that a lot!

Also, the interactions between the characters is sooooo engaging because it’s just so realistic! It’s exactly how people would speak in real life, using slang and such words :) I really enjoyed the dialogue sections! But the descriptions were also just...wow!

Your writing style is incredibly hooking, it has like an old storytelling vibe to it, like something from long ago...it’s really nice and cosy :)

I’ve only read up to chapter 3 but good job! You give some really good insight in to the Irish life as you set up the scene for Michaél and Dawid (hope I spelt them right omg!) also lovely addition translating the Irish! Much appreciated hahahha ;)

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Incredible!

Seriously, this book is amazing, the writing is beautiful and easy to read. But the plot is even better ! The plot and characters really got to me 🥺 they’re just so fun to read about, twins, an older brother and a funny best friend as well as a handsome love interest 💜 very, very engaging and such a fun read! The werewolf aspects are so well developed it’s incredible! Good job, I really enjoyed reading this☺️

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So cute!

Awwwwww this story is so adorable and I’m only 5 chapters in, but I will definitely be reading more 😌
I’m really enjoying it and only stopped to write this review😂 it’s very enjoyable and an easy, fun read which a lot of people can relate to.

Mia is a very realistic and well written character and her friendship with Lish is so cute 🥺 I can really picture it in my head!

I’m sorry I can’t give you advice on grammar or anything because I suck at that myself 😭 but I didn’t see anything completely wrong or anything (just things everyone gets wrong every now and then - maybe some proofreading? But like I said I’m rubbish at this myself so I apologise 😓) and it’s flows really nicely so no big problem there really! Your writing is wonderful 🥰

Like I said, it’s a very engaging story with realistic characters and problems too. I’m excited to continue reading this💖 good job, you should be very proud !!!

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Super fun to read!

This is really really fun to read so far, I’m so excited to see what’s to come! Even from just the summary, I was very interested to read this. It’s really cool that it’s relevant to today’s events too😂😂 good job so far!!!

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Really exciting!

I’m only a couple chapters in but it’s already proved to be very interesting and exciting! The adventure element to it is very suspenseful and makes you want to read more. Its enjoyable to read as there are so many new ideas and fun characters being introduced! Overall, I’d say it’s a very exicting read :)

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Hooking!

I’ve only read a couple of chapters but I was already hooked from the beginning! It’s a very interesting storyline dealing with an amazinggggg, strong and wonderful main character who I really admire 💗

The writing is wonderful too, very persuasive! You portray the characters exactly how you want, swaying the reader to feel the same way through your use of witty language! This also made it very humorous 😂

Love the charcter development which has clearly been thought out very well too! Like I said, it’s very hooking from the very first chapter and I would definitely recommend!

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