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Perfect

I don't have anything I can say critical about this story. It flows. It get's to the point, and the setting was described in detail in a way where I actually felt I was in the house. It scared me.

The story could use more detail written in such as, how did she get to a pen to write her note on the wall so quickly. But either way, it's a fascinating story.

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Fascinating and Creative

This is a fascinating and creative piece of work. It sounds more interesting than some paranormal movies I've watched. I think the reason why the guy died could be added in after the death of the woman who joined him. They could have a discussion about their deaths.

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Amazingly Written

This piece was both suspenseful and beautifully written. I really got a sense of the experience the character was having. The death in one place, then to be in a heaven in another. The scenery and description amazed me. There is really not anything I can say critical about this piece. It's perfect.

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