Larissa_Eyvette

Absolutely Enchanting!

Storm struck is a unique one for sure and one I continue to read!
Beautifully written characters as well as the story itself, as a reader I find myself oddly relatable to the main character (as a reader should be) and loved the situations she kept finding herself in with E.J Butler. The way E.J is written is truly enchanting with just her dialogue alone I can see she is a well brought up woman of power - and who doesn't love strong women.

My only real con here - and this is one of my own personal opinions. I feel like there should be more worldbuilding or at least small details that touch the six senses so that I can picture what kind of world they live in. From the very first chapter, although VERY intriguing, I felt like I was being thrown into movement without fully understanding what was going on or how the world works.

Overall, Wonderful read!

The Creativity is WILD!

With the first chapter, I could already see improvement in various aspects compared to the first. Better pace, writing skills, and even character development. The action never fails to please and the emotions are spot on!

My only cons are I wish there was more lore to the story and a more grounds plot that really gives the story a full meaning. it's a great, original work but I feel like it's just missing something. Also, and this is a personal note. I wish the book covers to these amazing stories were done better and display the uniqueness it holds. I feel like more readers would strive id they could see the power behind it rather than it looking like a typical cookbook you take a glance at before walking by.

Overall, A VERY unique and pleasant read.

An Original Adventure

(Reviewed up to 6 chapters) I will have to say I have never read anything like this before and it definitely brings something new and inspiring to the writing table.

-Pros: As I mentioned above, it is original and something I've never read before. Definitely a curious mix of superhero's meet master chef, the cooking concept was the best unique aspect of power transformation. Not to mention action packed and emotional! It takes one boy's self-doubt and turns it into something else...good or bad, no one knows.

-Cons. I feel like everything is too fast paced, there's a lot of telling rather than showing when it came to the origin of the powers and the world itself. Despite its uniqueness I felt not actual hook upon reading the first 2 chapters. Lastly, (on a personal level) I couldn't find any of the characters likable, or relatable including the main character himself.

It's a brilliant idea with an original story line (actual plot still unknown) and the writer displays superb writing skills! A must read for superhero and food lovers.

Compelling.

Very suspenseful and beautifully written. I hope this one continues; one chapter is just not enough.

Dark, Beautiful, Suspensful!

Okay, this story has over 50+ reviews and ALL are well deserved.

The writer keeps you on your toes as the story is told through the eyes of Ana and her rather twisted experience with her own mother and the dark secrets she currently hides. I'm hooked and I cannot wait for more!

If you're a lover of dark suspenseful writing with some good murder and not afraid of blood, then definitely READ this BOOK!

Charming & Heartwarming

Based on reading chapters 1-4. Kints Ukuroi is a beautiful tale of fantasy diversity where two worlds collide, and two very different beings hope to form a bond strong enough to stop what seems to be a neverending battle. A good love wins above all story.

PROS: The characters, Nic holds strength in writing compelling characters at different angles. You can feel their emotions, their struggles and desires to change. The writer makes their personalities relatable for young minds.

CONS: Storytelling. Although it is still too soon to determine the official plot of this story. I advise and mention that more descriptions and world building need to be done. Sthe story itself is very straight forward but there were many times I couldn't visualize the world around them. Dates were used but the Timeline and Era remained a confusing mystery. When dealing with the Fantasy genre, that is very important.

Overall, FANTASTIC read. I will definitely be checking into this one more as it updates. Keep up the good work!