GloomyPie

Perpetually gloomy, but I'll be your SUNSHINE☀️

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You have a right to rant

I actually get Julie's character, being over protected myself I know what my first sexual experiences did to me too. And this chapter actually shows Julie's developed as a character. She's direct, saying what she wants and that's to be fucked not playing totally by the triplets rules.

So great work

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Needs to be cohesive

I love where it's heading but I feel like things are escalating too quickly. One minute Sora is taking out the demon and putting it into the ring, the next Race is confessing his love for her? They literally just met a day ago.
Great story but needs to be cohesive

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