AK_John

Eagle River, AK

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Really good story, need an ending

This story was really good. It grabbed me from the start, and I absolutely love how you created the eyes.

There are some grammar issues, which an editing should find and help resolve. Other than that, I truly hope it's not finished. If so, the ending leaves a lot to be desired.

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Extremely good read

This story grabbed me from the start. With many books written in this type of environment, I expect grammar, punctuation and spelling issues. However, I was pleasantly surprised to find almost none. It is well written, with a good plot. Worth the read. Took me a few hours, overall.

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