Amazing so far
Like others have already mentioned, your writing style is top notch! Your world is both vivid and descriptive, that it is brought to life with flair. Emotions are already rising so early in the story which is very difficult to do as a writer, but the pace of the story is allows the story to unfold without feeling rushed or lacking detail. I already have definite character preferences and that being the Hyena and your main protagonist the fox who are worlds apart in character and temperament, but easily likable and relatable, I am definitely looking forward to where you go with this story, because I can already see a lot of drama ahead for our girl. Beautiful story my friend, so glad I opened the first page, but disappointed because I now have to wait for updates lol
Read the story now