Lala- pubs

Chilling

This novel gave me the chills as though I was watching a movie. The author has excellent detailing style and dialogue. The suspense! I was on my toes throughout the novel. The author portrayed the suspense, fear, and thrill perfectly. A plot like this is mostly seen in movies but the author made it better than watching it. Overall, this is an intriguing and suspenseful novel.

Astounding!

Hardly have I come across a book this intriguing. The writer did his/her best in conveying the fear, suspense and thrill to the readers. I also loved the way the writer describe the weather in each chapter. This is honestly the best book I've read about a vengeful spirit. I haven't complete the book but I can tell that it's Macho killing those boys in revenge for his and Nisha's death.

This is a masterpiece, I applaud the writer a job well done.

Beautiful!

I really loved it, I mean it got me hooked!. This is the first time i'll read a novel like this and I couldn't be more glad that I did. Connor's duality got me immersed headfast.
Would be better if your next chapters are longer.

SCHEME

The plot is intriguing and fast-paced. The main character, Ann is easy to relate with and understand. The fast pace of the story makes it a good read and an intense one at that and the first person's POV is lovingly creative. The author should work on the technical writing skill as the story progresses to make it a smooth read.

Overall, the author did well in making the readers see the characters as they would a real human. Keep up the good work, and with some polishing, the story is sure to make it big.

Perfect

This is enthralling!. I couldn't stop reading until the end. I like the author's writing style and descriptive style. The personality of the characters was perfectly portrayed. It would have been much better if the chapters were a bit longer.

Captivating

It's only two chapters and I'm hooked!. The mystery embedded in the book is unnerving. It kept me on my toes while reading the first chapter. How Chriss came to be in the sewer or how he ended up being with Julian? I'm really curious to know. The author's writing style is fascinating. I never got bored of the long chapters instead it left me asking for more. I'd be sure to read this book till the end. The author did a great job in drawing the readers in from the very first chapter. Perfectly written.

A good start

The beginning was a really good start, It'd draw the reader straight in. I like the author's fast-paced writing style, the story is much easier to follow and understand. The intriguing part of it could be touched up a bit, but still, it's an intriguing and thrilling novel to read. I would love to read more books from the author.

Calytrix's journey

You created the world background perfectly. I really liked the way you described the Citadel, I was almost imaging it. Also, your writing style Is perfect and I liked the vibrant determined personality of the main character. I'm sure that as the story progresses, it'd get more captivating.

Calytrix's journey

You created the world background perfectly. I really liked the way you described the Citadel, I was almost imaging it. Also, your writing style Is perfect and I liked the vibrant determined personality of the main character. I'm sure that as the story progresses, it'd get more captivating.

Calytrix's journey

You created the world background perfectly. I really liked the way you described the Citadel, I was almost imaging it. Also, your writing style Is perfect and I liked the vibrant determined personality of the main character. I'm sure that as the story progresses, it'd get more captivating.

The creepy prince and a countess to be

I really loved it!. Even though it's still just two chapters, it was really intriguing and I just kept reading till the end. I loved your writing style and the way you wrote about the prince personality and Faery's. I hope the both of them fall in love later on.
And please, update soon.

Lakshya- A key to open

The starting is really intriguing, detailed, and fast to the point. I'd love to read more of the novel. I'd advice editing the novel cause there are lots of typos and grammertical errors. Overall, it's a good and engaging story, but it will be more better if you fixed the errors.
I would love to read more of your story after fixing it. Good luck!.

Deviant

I really loved it!. I know I'm not perfect in talking like a professional reviewer, but I can say that I'll definite read this book to the end. And your Grammer structure, it was the best!.
I've never seen or read a book that's this perfect when it comes to describing or showing. I could literally imagine being in the scene cause your description was so vivid and detailed.
Keep up the good work and please update soon😍.