Adair Night

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Secret Indeed

I really loved the story.
The plot was immersive. It draws you in and keeps you enchanted till the end.
The blurb could use some help as it is a bit misguiding. The story is beautifully written with minimal errors. What I felt was missing, was the first person POV as it just adds to the suspense.
Keep writing because you are amazing!

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Need

The First She is another masterpiece in Ancientt's collection. The world of Erzon is deadly but beautiful with the author's wild imagination and beautiful descriptions.
The story has a way of captivating you, roping you in the web of words, leaving you wanting more and more. (the reason why this review is names need) . Once you begin, it makes it impossible to put the book down. There are moments when I forgot to breath because the story detached me from this world.
I really love the fact that our female lead, Kira is not something we call a disney princess. She is normal human beings. She has issues that root hate for men in her heart in the beginning but everyone has their reasons. What matters more is the fact we overcome them and lead a better life, like Kira did.
The innocents squabbles and the gifts that KIra and Vrox had were awe-worthy. Whether it was gifting Kira with semen or taking the fluttering of his heart as disease, Vrox always managed to put a smile on my face. He is a character with beautiful soul, respectful morals and handsome physical features ;).
I can talk forever about Vrox's greatness, that is how amazing Ancientt made his character to be. His adorable expressions, doubts, his respect and care for Kira (when she was his woman or a mutilated lost child) and his love for his brothers, all of it was amazing. He set my standards for both men and aliens quite high. His humbleness to his title just added to the mix we called Vrox.
The plot is so very unique and the author's writing skills are note-worthy. The uniqueness that rivals a rare gem in shine too just makes you fall in love with this story. The erotic scenes are just what we need, HOT! (I think she should put a warning of getting burned before every smut scene).
All in all, this story is a monumental discovery many readers will make. It is addictive and leaves you wanting more and more. Maybe author should add a warning of possible addiction before the story ;)

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Something different

This story at first glance might deceive you. You might think that this a common best friend to lovers plot. But mind you, I it way more than that.
With a humorous way of writing and many struggles of a realistic teen life, this story is something you will enjoy when you read and crave when you reach near the end of the updates.

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Nice Story...

I really like the whole progress and movement of the story. The transitions were clean and beautiful. Not being a fan of any kind of cheating, I personally was a bit sad during those scenes. Other than that story is amazing and I really love the character development Sacha portrayed. Keep Writing!

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Beautiful!!!

This story was beautiful! When I started reading I thought it would be pretty cliche but as it proceeded I just fell in love with the story and the characters. The witty and humorous remarks are just amazing.
I love the narcissist self depreciating personalities they share. THE WAY LOVE BUDS BETWEEN THEM IS JUST BEAUTIFUL...
OMG I AM IN LOVE BABE!!!❤
I need someone to text me like that...😭
Overall this story is beautiful and totally lovely.❤❤❤
Keep writing!!!

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A heart shattering story

This story is amazing in each and every sense possible. The last three chapters especially had me in tears constantly. The twists and turns were startling and shook me to the very core. I loved the way you depicted the deteriorating mental health of Amabel and how John was her grasp to reality.
I feel the character of Deliha could have been developed a bit more than just of a mirror to reality. Struggles that Amabel faced were truly something broke my heart. This story is one masterpiece with it's dark and serene beauty. You were great with your story telling ways and it was so easy to connect ourselves to with the characters, so much that their death made our heartache.
Keep writing this amazing stuff and we will keep supporting you.❤❤❤

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A M A Z I N G !!!

Amazing that is how I would describe this story. The plot and the transitioning between the scenes was beautiful. I loved the way you described her character and Ava's emotions, her mental state. She is what I describe as an anti-hero character and you portrayed it with such accuracy that it is breathtaking.
And story is beautiful and so damn unique in itself that you will not be able to put it down once you start reading. This book is so amazing that I am waiting for the sequel for it. I mean the ending was an open ending with way to many possibilities. I want to see where life takes Ava and how Seth reacts.
BTW I am still team Luke because I think he is a really nice guy buried under peer pressure and need to fit in.
Please bring out the next part soon I love your story.
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A Step Forward

I adore this story a lot. This story holds special place for me among her other stories because it deals with the topic of insecurities. It is a topic that is widely spread but at the same time it is one of the most hardest topics to discuss about. Each and ever person has their own insecurity and this story is all about overcoming them.
A important motto of this story that I love is that you need to love yourself before you love others. Your heart needs to beat for yourself before it beats for someone else. I love how you captured the beauty of this situation without making any character seem weak.
I also love the bursts of humor and the romantic aspect of this novel too. I really need Cynthia in real life. I am not even going to talk about sex because that is as usual beyond amazing!!!
I love your book and t is a huge step forward in mental health and self love and I love it being one of the victims of self loathing attitude. Keep writing and provide others hope. Sending love ❤
Aspen Out ❤❤❤

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A Literary Beauty

Can we please sit back for a moment and appreciate the beauty of this book. Each and every character is penned to such a merit that it takes your breath away. I love the way the author puts the light on the reflection process of the male lead. I love how non-cliche our female lead is. She is a level headed, concentrated and self-confident woman that every girl aspires to be. Book yearns to be read again and again making it impossible to resist it. It is simply one of the best books I have ever read. This book has a lasting impact on the reading choices of the readers without any deliberate efforts. Author is a wordsmith that hits with words too the point.
Love your works❤❤❤

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It is soo original

Ancientt you have done it once again by creating a plot so original and the concept is so damn new. It's like a whole new domain into the arena of writing. I love the way your character evolve significantly and all of us love a strong female lead with level headed mind and that is what you have seen delivering us since so much time.Unlike other books out there in werewolf domain your book is unique like a snowflake and I love it. Thank you so much for your hard work. Sending you love from across the world ❤❤❤

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