Adalia S. Lansthrone

“How can anyone not like reading? Dragons aren't real? No problem. I had the immense pleasure of meeting Smaug through Bilbo Baggins. I'd like to see non readers say the same” - Amelia

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Blooming in the face of Death

Marvellous start! The first paragraph captured the reader completely and the subsequent chapters held them, refusing to let go. The plot of this story is amazing and I enjoyed the drama. Heaping the troubles on the MC, right from the start, gained sympathy from the readers and it made you like and want to root for her. That was great. There were parts where it got a bit confusing but those weren't too bad. I believe there were also some grammar errors. That's fixed easily with a little editing. An app I use that helps with that is Grammarly. Aside from this, I had no complaints about this novel! Overall, the story was wonderful!! I'll return to this novel when it's completed.

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Inside Out

Amazing! This story was wonderfully written and simply captivating. The plot is interesting and original. I also enjoyed the writing style. It draws the reader in and refuses to let them go. The descriptions were also great, despite the first chapter, I did;t notice any grammar mistakes, so great job with that. Overall, wonderful job!

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The Six Guardians

Looking for a vivid and original novel featuring relatable well fleshed out characters? Then I would recommend this book to you. The author made excellent use of imagery without boring readers and each character has despite being powerful beings all have their own flaws and personalities. Something I really enjoyed about this book was the action, it was described just right and was not unrealistic, which was nice to read. The writing style was simplistic and I loved that. The grammar was also good.

Overall, this was an amazing read and would recommend it to anyone who likes this genre!! Great job to the author!

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Stars Stars Stars

Are you someone who loves stars and searching for something unique and different? If so, I would recommend this story. Many stories of the fantasy genre I've been reading are all rather clichéd and while still enjoyable, it's refreshing finding something different. The story just started so I can't fully appreciate it, but from what I have read, it's amazing and has lots of promise. Can't wait for more updates. 😊

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Child Of The Flowers

Amazing! I love the fantasy genre and this book did not disappoint. I enjoyed the details and world-building. The plot was great and the writing style was fantastic. There were no errors that I noticed with the technical writing skills. Overall, great job! Really enjoyed this novel.

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His Emily

At 7 chapters, I really enjoyed this story. The descriptions were wonderful and I loved the writing style. Overall, it was a great story and I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys this genre.

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Intriguining

At only one chapter in, this story still manages to be enticing and mysterious. The plot appears promising and the writing style is nice. There are a few grammatical errors that interrupted the flow of the story, but overall it was an enjoyable and intriguing read. Can't wait for updates!

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Compelling

This was an amazing short story I really enjoyed. Light, calm, perfectly paced and with a dark twist at the end. I have high standards when it comes to thrillers and I enjoyed this story much more than I expected. Great work!

The plot could have used a bit more depth but considering it was a short story, I'll rate it 5 stars. The writing style was well suited for the story and I didn't notice any technical errors. Overall, wonderful job, can't wait to read more from this author!!

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Obsession

Most stories I've read romanticize toxic and unhealthy relationships. This novel, however, sheds light on the issues of such things, specifically the obsessive love disorder or OLD. This made the novel unique, realistic and had the reader on the edge of their seats.

The plot of the story is great so far and I'm enjoying the authors writing style. I adore how distinct and realistic the characters are as well as the descriptions. As for the technical writing skills, the chapters have yet to be edited, so I'll edit my review when the novel is finished.

Overall, great story, I love the idea and concept and I can't wait to see where it goes. Great job!! ❤

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Fantastic!

I haven't finished this novel yet, but from what I have read, I'm completely hooked! The world-building is well done, and the characters are realistic and distinct! I enjoyed the mythology aspect of it and the Egyptian gods. The plot was great. The writing style well suited for the story. There was no noticeable technical errors, so great job there. Overall, it was an amazing story and I would recommend it to anyone who likes fantasy and mythology.

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The Devils Angel

This was an adorable and amusing read, which I thoroughly enjoyed. I look forward to Part 2!

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Trapped

This was a delicious tale of a human girl and her vampire master. The characters were realistic given the circumstances and situations. The descriptions were great. And overall, the story was an emotional rollercoaster I enjoyed every second of. Great job!

Sidenote, I ship the main characters 😄😉

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Best Seller Material

Fantastic! This short story was an incredible joy to read and had me on the edge of my seat. The pace was fast in some places and normal in others giving the story such a realistic feel. Almost as though you were in the story and experiencing everything along with the main character. I loved the descriptions and the plot was perfect. I also enjoyed the writing style and there were no technical errors that I noticed. Anyone looking for a short horror thriller, this book is perfect for you!!

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Bittersweet

When I read the summary I had assumed it was about a guy trying to get his wife, childhood best friend or girlfriend back. However, I was in for a surprise.

This was a beautiful short story written in an elegant simplistic hand and refused to let you go without finishing it. Only at the very end did everything fall into place. It's not easy withholding so much info from the reader and then surprising them with it at the end, but Shreya managed it wonderfully.

This is a sweet and emotion-packed short story I would definitely recommend to any and everyone.

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The sword maiden

The plot was great and I really enjoyed it. The writing style was smooth and suited the story. There were some grammar mistakes but those can be fixed with a bit of extra editing. Overall, great story!! (I especially love the name.)

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In Love With The Bad Boy

The plot seems okay, it's still too early to tell. I liked the writing style, however, there were a lot of technical errors. Those can be fixed with a little extra editing. Overall, not a bad story that has potential. I look forward to seeing where it goes. Good luck!!

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Enthralling

I enjoyed the collection of poems written by Muse. They were a delight to read and full of emotions. I found the poems beautifully haunting and once you started reading, it was impossible to stop halfway. Every verse had meaning and the lyrical quality of the prose was nothing short of amazing. Great job!!

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Heir of the Alpha

This seems like a werewolf or shifter novel and I usually find such books cliched. This one felt different and had some originality. A welcoming breath of fresh air. The MC is very realistic and relatable making him likable. The plot is great, and I especially loved the writing style. Simple and charming without giving too many details. It suited the story and was delightful. As for the technical skills, I noticed nothing off, the grammar, sentence structures and formatting was great and nothing out of placed that I noticed. Overall, great job, can't wait to read more!

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Amazing

I enjoyed this story! The plot is great, focusing on a cynical angel that was kicked out of heaven and turned into a human. Aforementioned angel is then taken in by an unsuspecting 27 year old vet. The fun is just beginning. The authors writing style is well suited to the story. Their were however, a few grammatical errors but those could easily be fixed with some editing. Overall, great story. Can't wait for updates!!

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5/5

I did not expect I would enjoy this novel but I did. I ended up binging all 6 chapters and I have no complaints at all abt this novel. Hope the author updates soon!! ❤

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Riveting!

Fast-paced and Exciting. That's how I would describe this novel. At only 2 chapters it's difficult to Rate the plot but from what I have seen it looks very promising. I enjoyed the writing style, short and direct. It worked beautifully for this novel! I didn't notice any technical or grammar errors, so great job with that. Overall, an exciting and intriguing novel I really enjoyed. I'm gonna stick with this one and see how it goes, but I would deff recommend it to lovers of thrillers and ghost stories!! Great job!

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The Lost Witch

This was an intriguing story and quite unlike any other stories I've ever read about with a witch. It's only 5 chapters and the story is moving at a slow pace so it's difficult to judge the plot, however from what I have seen it looks promising. The writing style is pretty good and works for the story. Finally, I didn't notice any technical mistakes. Overall, it was a great story. Curious to see where it goes and will get back to it once it's completed.

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Catalyst

This was a great story I enjoyed. It was an amazing combination of fantasy and action which I really enjoyed. The plot was fast-paced and intriguing and the characters were also excellent. I didn't expect to like this story but I really enjoyed reading it. The writing style was likable and worked for the story. There were a few grammar mistakes that interrupted the flow of the story, but that is easily fixed with a little editing Overall it was a great story!

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Feel

Only 2 chapters have been written so far so it's difficult to truly judge and leave an accurate review but so far this seems to be headed in a great direction. The MC is relatable and full of fire. The plot is still vague at this point but the writing style was lovely. Overall, great job and good luck with the rest of this story!

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Finding Paradise in Hell

Isabel just survived a tsunami in which she lost her husband and had a miscarriage. She meets the leader of the just ravished country and he has the worry and concerns of his people weighing on his shoulders. This is a beautiful story of finding love in these circumstances. I found this was a very wholesome story I enjoyed. The plot was great. The writing style was perfect and there were no technical mistakes I noticed.

Overall, amazing story! Would recommend this to anyone!

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Hired For Secrets

A well-written novel. The plot was great and the writing style was perfect. There were no technical errors that I could see. Great job!!

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Bad Blood

This story dives straight into the action from the start sweeping the reader into this world and capturing their attention. The writing style is ingenious. The dialogue is realistic and there is so much depth to the characters. The plot is beautifully crafted and the descriptions are well done. Overall this story deserves 5 stars and was an entertaining and suspenseful read. Can't wait to read more!

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The Last

I enjoyed the world-building and the plot. The characters and the dynamics between them were interesting and entertaining to read. The authors writing style was interesting and the plot is wonderful. It's been a while since I read anything with star crossed lovers. The paragraphs could be a bit shorter and I noticed a few technical errors but aside from these it was a great story which I enjoyed!

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Captivating

The story revolves around a young boy named Andrew. A kid who follows the rules and gets good grades. A calm simple life, albeit boring one. All that changes however when he is forced by 2 bullies to go on a camping trip with them.

The plot was great, I really enjoyed the authors writing style and the dynamics between the characters. I love novels with characters of distinct personalities and I found that in this novel. Overall, this story was very compelling and intriguing. Great job!!

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Amazing!

This story is simply a masterpiece. I've only read 6 chapters so far but I love it. The world-building and writing style was fantastic and enthralling. A reader can't help but get drawn into this book and not want to put it down. The characters and subplots were beautifully intertwined with each other and added to the allure of this novel. Overall, Great story! I really enjoyed it, and if there is more from this author, I'll definitely be reading them.

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Sweet Sorrow

I loved this novel. The characters and emotions conveyed were extremely realistic and were a pleasure to read. I enjoyed the poetic scenes and the flashbacks were beautifully written. I especially loved the writing style. The plot was slow-paced which suited the mood. Overall, a great story. This is one I'll definitely return to when It's finished.

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Married To Mr. Arrogant

I really enjoyed this story although it's only 4 chapters right now. The characters are funny and have distinct personalities. The interactions between the main characters were especially enjoyable. If there are any points of concern, the story could use more editing, other than that, it was overall an enjoyable read. Great job!!

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Amazing

This story was an absolutely beautiful read. The plot was great. The characters were enjoyable to read about. The descriptions were also really great, I could easily imagine and see all the scenes and characters. Overall a very well-written book I enjoyed!!

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Rival Gangs

I enjoyed the overall story. The writing style had this unique quality to it. I couldn't quite place what it was but there was a subtle touch of smth that made this novel interesting to read. I really enjoyed the characters. Bossy, audacious Xander and strong-willed, sassy Sienna. They make an interesting pair whenever they're put together. I especially enjoyed their first time, meeting. If there was anything about this book, it was the grammar. I suggest doing some more revision and editing. For Edits, I use Grammarly, it's free and helps big time. Other than that though, the story wasn't bad at all. Keep on writing and practicing!

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Amazing!

I absolutely loved and enjoyed this story. I love horror and thrillers and this book was simply perfect. I have no complaints about this story at all. I genuinely enjoyed it and can't wait for the next update. The pace is perfect the story is written in a way that it plays with you're emotions and it was maddening how every chapter ended in a cliffhanger making you want more. I simply couldn't get enough of this story and am now impatiently awaiting the next chapter. Awesome job Chere!! Can't wait to read more from you!

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You and Me and You

The beginning caught my attention, being very relatable regarding math class. The interactions between the MC's and the other characters were very realistic. The plot was okay. I would suggest giving more time for Rohit and Lisa to get to know each other before jumping into a physical relationship. In the story. things seemed to get hot and heavy right off the bat. I found that rather confusing, however, that was just my personal opinion. There were a few grammar mistakes, which can easily be fixed with a little editing.

It's only the first chapter, so I can't judge the story that well. But overall, it has potential. Good luck!!

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Just As You Are

The very first chapter had a poetic beauty that really grabbed my attention! It was a wonderful start. The plot seems interesting. I really enjoyed the writing style. Nana was very descriptive and I could envision everything and all the character as I read and it was an amazing experience. Overall, great story! This is one I'll return to when it's finished!!

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Spirit of Fire

So far, what really caught my attention about this story is the vivid descriptions that were beautifully placed. I could imagine the scenery, the characters, everything, and I loved that! The plot and the writing style were enjoyable. I especially enjoyed the interactions between the characters because of how realistic they felt. I also liked how you wrote from 2 different points of view. Usually, I find it annoying, but I really enjoyed your story. The foreshadowing is well placed and adds intrigue to the story. Overall great story! I'll come back to this when it's completed to enjoy the full story uninterrupted.

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Intriguining

This was a great story. The descriptions were enjoyable and the tension, as well as the emotions, were palpable. The grammar was perfect. The plot was interesting and the overall story was captivating! Great story!!

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The Archaeological Chronicles

I enjoyed that. I don't usually find sci-fi or even aliens for that matter interesting but this story was simply amazing! I really enjoyed the fact that Time had written from the pov of the alien. That made the story highly interesting. The characters were also very relatable which made them likable. I noticed a few minor mistakes with the punctuations, but that can easily be fixed with a bit of editing. Overall, great story!

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Broken Glass

Although just at the very beginning of this story, the starting alone was very strong and intriguing. I like where this story is going and the descriptions are kept short leaving just enough to the reader's imagination. All of this author's other works were masterpieces and I have no doubt so will this one. If there is anything it would be the need for editing but the story is a rough draft so that wouldn't;t be a problem. Great job writing. Can't wait for more updates!!

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The Unborn Joel

1 word. Wow! This story was not at all what I was expecting and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The story had a lot of telling instead of showing and normally I would find the story boring as a result but the writing style more than made up for it. The way the story was written, I felt like a 5-year-old again listening to my grandmother telling me a bedtime story. It was a beautiful experience and it's amazing the author managed to do that. Great job with this story!! Hope to read more from you someday! ❤

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Complexity

I only read the first few chapters but this was a great novel. The writing style was wonderful, the technical skills were perfect and the plot seems interesting. The characters are very life-like and the interactions between them are realistic. The chapters aren't too long or too short, a great story overall. Keep writing!

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Peace and War

I don't read erotica but I did read the first 3 chapters of this story. Although it was just the beginning, the story was very compelling and completely drew me in. The writing style was wonderful and the story, in general, is enticing and a pleasure to read. Great job!

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An Essential

Are you a writer? Then there's no question. You ABSOLUTELY want and NEED this book. Trust me on this.

The chapters are sharp and cut straight to the point while also managing to be entertaining and enjoyable. The advice and tips in this book are logical and are backed up with the author's own personal experience.

Even if you're not a writer, I would still recommend this book, because it's a humorous read and if you ever need to give advice to budding writers this is the perfect book. Every chapter captures the struggles in that particular area, the mistakes that are made and how to avoid them. The technical skills are perfect and the formatting is clear and easy on the eyes.

Rebecca clearly knows what she's doing and I would recommend this book to anyone. Excited for chapter 8!!!

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A love Never Meant To Be

This was a wonderful story, I only read the first 6 chapters but it was entertaining and I really enjoyed it. The chapters are short and to the point which was nice. The plot was interesting and the characters amusing.

If I have any critiques, the story could use a bit more editing and the sentence and paragraph structures, as well as the formatting, could be adjusted.

Aside from that, it was a wonderful story! Keep writing!

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The New Me

Great Story!

Although only 2 chapters written, the plot has potential and the storyline appears intriguing. There are a few grammar mistakes and I would recommend some editing with the formatting as in some places the dialogue is clumped and confusing, but other than that, I have no complaints about this book. It's a compelling story filled with potential. I look forward to reading the full story when it's finished.

Great job!

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An Incomplete Love Story

A story revolving around 3 best friends. 2 of which fell in love, but their love story never concluded and was left incomplete instead. The way Chiya wrote this story leaves you interested and thirsting for more. What happened to the other friend? Why was the love story incomplete? What happened between these best friends? So many questions left unanswered. This story seems like a tragedy. It's only the first chapter at this point, but it's already very good. I would recommend this to anyone looking for what seems to be an ill-fated love story.

Amazing job with this story! I need to know what happens next. Please, please, update soon!!! 😊

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Beautifully Poignant

This was a short, simplistic story but was absolutely amazing and filled with raw emotions. I really enjoyed it. The author did amazing with the characters and the writing style. There were no grammar mistakes and the story itself was interesting to read. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone.

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Don't Look Down

This is a wonderful story. The author did a great job of engaging the reader's curiosity. The characters are distinct and it's clear thought went into the creation of them. They are also realistic and relatable. If you're looking for a story that has main characters with perfect lives or they have everything working for them, then this isn't for you. Some of the chapters could be longer and a bit more editing is recommended, but overall amazing story!! ❤

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The family

This is a great book. It started out seeming cliched but was hilarious so I stuck with it and by the second chapter I loved it!!! The main character was realistic and the story humours and fast-paced which I really enjoyed. Aside from some technical mistakes which interrupted me as I was reading, this was a highly entertaining story, and I can't wait for new updates!! The author did a great job with it!

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Riveting

Aside from very very few exceptions, I don't like sci-fi and usually wouldn't read them. However, this novel is one of those exceptions. This story is so exciting and full of action and adventure. I especially love the characters, they were so detailed and well thought out I could easily picture them as I read and it helped with getting immersed in Vale's world. The creativity was refreshing and everything was so masterfully written I ended up binge-reading. I still haven't finished it but from what I have read, this is definitely a 5 stars novel. Great job to the writer!!

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Rising Tide

As far as vampire stories go, this one was an original and I enjoyed it. I enjoyed it so much, this is my third time reading this novel. Looking for vampires but want something a bit different? Then this book is for you! Can't wait to read the rest of the books in the series!!

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An Entertaining Read

I loved it!! Of all the books I've read on Inkiit, this one is probably my favourite. Every chapter had me laughing. The main character is a humorous and interesting yet somewhat relatable person. The storyline is absolutely gripping. I'm actually impatient for the next updates.

I noticed to convey the tones or moods in certain scenes the author used emojis. Traditionally, you wouldn't see a book using emojis in that manner, and some would argue it's an incorrect usage of emojis during a story. However, the beauty in writing your own novel is you can do whatever you want with it, regardless of rules. And I think adding the emojis was a perfect addition to the story. Because of the emojis, the reader had a clearer understanding of the mc's feelings during a particular scene/moment. This added to the overall enjoyment and pleasure of reading this book.

If I have any critiques, it's the fact the grammar could use some improvement. Due to grammar errors, the flow of the story was interrupted. Other than this, I have no complaints.

I thoroughly loved and enjoyed this Novel. I would definitely recommend it to anyone searching for a fun light-hearted, enjoyable read.

Please update soon and often :)

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Avengers!!

This story is great for Avenger fans. It's ongoing and the story is written in a way, that the reader is the one living the story. As a result, it's very interactive and that makes it so delightful and exciting to read. If there is anything I would suggest fixing, that would be the paragraph structure. It's too long, and that makes it a bit difficult to read and concentrate on the story. Try breaking them up into smaller paragraphs and alternate them, so if the last one u wrote was long, make the next paragr[h shorter. That will significantly improve the flow and readability of ur story. Otherwise, it's really enjoyable, so don't give up on it. Looking forward to updates!! ❤❤

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Captivating

I was hooked. The story was a bit too wordy, and took a bit of concentration to follow, but overall, I enjoyed it. I'm very excited and can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome job!

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