Adalia S. Lansthrone

That one ride

An interesting story, still at the beginning but brimming with potential. The characters are likable and fun to read about. The writing style was great, as for the technical writing skills, there were some minor errors, but otherwise, it didn't hinder the story much. Overall, a good story, I'm curious to know more about. Good luck and good job!

The Haunting Daunt

I enjoyed the story. A comical and haunting tale with suspense and scares woven into it. I liked the characters and the vivid descriptions as well as the vivid imagery painted with the scenes. If there was anything I had issues with it was the formatting, but otherwise, it was a wonderful story. No grammar and spelling mistakes. Great job to the author!!

Fantastic!

I haven't finished this novel yet, but from what I have read, I'm completely hooked! The world-building is well done, and the characters are realistic and distinct! I enjoyed the mythology aspect of it and the Egyptian gods. The plot was great. The writing style well suited for the story. There was no noticeable technical errors, so great job there. Overall, it was an amazing story and I would recommend it to anyone who likes fantasy and mythology.

The Archaeological Chronicles

I enjoyed that. I don't usually find sci-fi or even aliens for that matter interesting but this story was simply amazing! I really enjoyed the fact that Time had written from the pov of the alien. That made the story highly interesting. The characters were also very relatable which made them likable. I noticed a few minor mistakes with the punctuations, but that can easily be fixed with a bit of editing. Overall, great story!

Stars Stars Stars

Are you someone who loves stars and searching for something unique and different? If so, I would recommend this story. Many stories of the fantasy genre I've been reading are all rather clichéd and while still enjoyable, it's refreshing finding something different. The story just started so I can't fully appreciate it, but from what I have read, it's amazing and has lots of promise. Can't wait for more updates. 😊

The Skirmish

An interesting, futuristic story, based on a world where humans have become extinct. It's still too early to judge the plot of the story but there is much potential. I enjoy the political intrigue of this society and the distinctness of the characters. The writing flowed and I didn't notice any technical writing errors. Overall, great story, I look forward to seeing where it goes!

The Haunting Horror

The chapters are short and easy to read and the characters are intriguing and diverse. The plot gets better and better and better as the chapters increase, and overall it's an interesting and so far enjoyable read. Hope you update soon and good luck with your writing!

A reason to live.

An intense and intriguing novel from the very first chapter. A dark and twisted story of orphaned twins living with a monstrous relative as their guardian. One with whom escaping seems to be impossible. The plot is very interesting and steeped in mystery and promise. The characters are realistic and relatable and I enjoyed the multiple pov's. My only criticism for this novel would be the grammar and the formatting, but the story still needs to be edited, so I'll adjust my review and ratings when that happens. Overall, this is a wonderful novel to read not for the faint of heart.

An intense heart-wrenching masterpiece

This short story left me speechless. It tells a tale of love, hopelessness, depression, regret and guilt. It revolves around a lumberjack willing to go to war and risk everything for his country so long as his lover remains safe and away from the battlefield. As he writes letters from the barracks we watch as the war and everything he has to endure takes its toll on him and slowly changes him. His only friend's death leaves him badly scarred and with each letter, we watch as he loses a bit more of himself. The story ends with an unexpected twist that ties up any loose ends and results in an impactful but satisfactory ending. Overall, amazing job with this story, I have no complaints and I genuinely enjoyed it. Would definitely recommend this to anyone looking for an emotional story that can be read in a short time.

Child Of The Flowers

Amazing! I love the fantasy genre and this book did not disappoint. I enjoyed the details and world-building. The plot was great and the writing style was fantastic. There were no errors that I noticed with the technical writing skills. Overall, great job! Really enjoyed this novel.

Compelling

This was an amazing short story I really enjoyed. Light, calm, perfectly paced and with a dark twist at the end. I have high standards when it comes to thrillers and I enjoyed this story much more than I expected. Great work!

The plot could have used a bit more depth but considering it was a short story, I'll rate it 5 stars. The writing style was well suited for the story and I didn't notice any technical errors. Overall, wonderful job, can't wait to read more from this author!!

Obsession

Most stories I've read romanticize toxic and unhealthy relationships. This novel, however, sheds light on the issues of such things, specifically the obsessive love disorder or OLD. This made the novel unique, realistic and had the reader on the edge of their seats.

The plot of the story is great so far and I'm enjoying the authors writing style. I adore how distinct and realistic the characters are as well as the descriptions. As for the technical writing skills, the chapters have yet to be edited, so I'll edit my review when the novel is finished.

Overall, great story, I love the idea and concept and I can't wait to see where it goes. Great job!! ❤

The Devils Angel

This was an adorable and amusing read, which I thoroughly enjoyed. I look forward to Part 2!

Best Seller Material

Fantastic! This short story was an incredible joy to read and had me on the edge of my seat. The pace was fast in some places and normal in others giving the story such a realistic feel. Almost as though you were in the story and experiencing everything along with the main character. I loved the descriptions and the plot was perfect. I also enjoyed the writing style and there were no technical errors that I noticed. Anyone looking for a short horror thriller, this book is perfect for you!!

Bittersweet

When I read the summary I had assumed it was about a guy trying to get his wife, childhood best friend or girlfriend back. However, I was in for a surprise.

This was a beautiful short story written in an elegant simplistic hand and refused to let you go without finishing it. Only at the very end did everything fall into place. It's not easy withholding so much info from the reader and then surprising them with it at the end, but Shreya managed it wonderfully.

This is a sweet and emotion-packed short story I would definitely recommend to any and everyone.

The sword maiden

The plot was great and I really enjoyed it. The writing style was smooth and suited the story. There were some grammar mistakes but those can be fixed with a bit of extra editing. Overall, great story!! (I especially love the name.)

In Love With The Bad Boy

The plot seems okay, it's still too early to tell. I liked the writing style, however, there were a lot of technical errors. Those can be fixed with a little extra editing. Overall, not a bad story that has potential. I look forward to seeing where it goes. Good luck!!

Enthralling

I enjoyed the collection of poems written by Muse. They were a delight to read and full of emotions. I found the poems beautifully haunting and once you started reading, it was impossible to stop halfway. Every verse had meaning and the lyrical quality of the prose was nothing short of amazing. Great job!!

Amazing

I enjoyed this story! The plot is great, focusing on a cynical angel that was kicked out of heaven and turned into a human. Aforementioned angel is then taken in by an unsuspecting 27 year old vet. The fun is just beginning. The authors writing style is well suited to the story. Their were however, a few grammatical errors but those could easily be fixed with some editing. Overall, great story. Can't wait for updates!!

The Lost Witch

This was an intriguing story and quite unlike any other stories I've ever read about with a witch. It's only 5 chapters and the story is moving at a slow pace so it's difficult to judge the plot, however from what I have seen it looks promising. The writing style is pretty good and works for the story. Finally, I didn't notice any technical mistakes. Overall, it was a great story. Curious to see where it goes and will get back to it once it's completed.

Catalyst

This was a great story I enjoyed. It was an amazing combination of fantasy and action which I really enjoyed. The plot was fast-paced and intriguing and the characters were also excellent. I didn't expect to like this story but I really enjoyed reading it. The writing style was likable and worked for the story. There were a few grammar mistakes that interrupted the flow of the story, but that is easily fixed with a little editing Overall it was a great story!

Feel

Only 2 chapters have been written so far so it's difficult to truly judge and leave an accurate review but so far this seems to be headed in a great direction. The MC is relatable and full of fire. The plot is still vague at this point but the writing style was lovely. Overall, great job and good luck with the rest of this story!

Finding Paradise in Hell

Isabel just survived a tsunami in which she lost her husband and had a miscarriage. She meets the leader of the just ravished country and he has the worry and concerns of his people weighing on his shoulders. This is a beautiful story of finding love in these circumstances. I found this was a very wholesome story I enjoyed. The plot was great. The writing style was perfect and there were no technical mistakes I noticed.

Overall, amazing story! Would recommend this to anyone!

Hired For Secrets

A well-written novel. The plot was great and the writing style was perfect. There were no technical errors that I could see. Great job!!

Bad Blood

This story dives straight into the action from the start sweeping the reader into this world and capturing their attention. The writing style is ingenious. The dialogue is realistic and there is so much depth to the characters. The plot is beautifully crafted and the descriptions are well done. Overall this story deserves 5 stars and was an entertaining and suspenseful read. Can't wait to read more!

The Last

I enjoyed the world-building and the plot. The characters and the dynamics between them were interesting and entertaining to read. The authors writing style was interesting and the plot is wonderful. It's been a while since I read anything with star crossed lovers. The paragraphs could be a bit shorter and I noticed a few technical errors but aside from these it was a great story which I enjoyed!

Amazing!

This story is simply a masterpiece. I've only read 6 chapters so far but I love it. The world-building and writing style was fantastic and enthralling. A reader can't help but get drawn into this book and not want to put it down. The characters and subplots were beautifully intertwined with each other and added to the allure of this novel. Overall, Great story! I really enjoyed it, and if there is more from this author, I'll definitely be reading them.

Sweet Sorrow

I loved this novel. The characters and emotions conveyed were extremely realistic and were a pleasure to read. I enjoyed the poetic scenes and the flashbacks were beautifully written. I especially loved the writing style. The plot was slow-paced which suited the mood. Overall, a great story. This is one I'll definitely return to when It's finished.

Married To Mr. Arrogant

I really enjoyed this story although it's only 4 chapters right now. The characters are funny and have distinct personalities. The interactions between the main characters were especially enjoyable. If there are any points of concern, the story could use more editing, other than that, it was overall an enjoyable read. Great job!!

Amazing

This story was an absolutely beautiful read. The plot was great. The characters were enjoyable to read about. The descriptions were also really great, I could easily imagine and see all the scenes and characters. Overall a very well-written book I enjoyed!!

Amazing!

I absolutely loved and enjoyed this story. I love horror and thrillers and this book was simply perfect. I have no complaints about this story at all. I genuinely enjoyed it and can't wait for the next update. The pace is perfect the story is written in a way that it plays with you're emotions and it was maddening how every chapter ended in a cliffhanger making you want more. I simply couldn't get enough of this story and am now impatiently awaiting the next chapter. Awesome job Chere!! Can't wait to read more from you!

Spirit of Fire

So far, what really caught my attention about this story is the vivid descriptions that were beautifully placed. I could imagine the scenery, the characters, everything, and I loved that! The plot and the writing style were enjoyable. I especially enjoyed the interactions between the characters because of how realistic they felt. I also liked how you wrote from 2 different points of view. Usually, I find it annoying, but I really enjoyed your story. The foreshadowing is well placed and adds intrigue to the story. Overall great story! I'll come back to this when it's completed to enjoy the full story uninterrupted.

Complexity

I only read the first few chapters but this was a great novel. The writing style was wonderful, the technical skills were perfect and the plot seems interesting. The characters are very life-like and the interactions between them are realistic. The chapters aren't too long or too short, a great story overall. Keep writing!

An Essential

Are you a writer? Then there's no question. You ABSOLUTELY want and NEED this book. Trust me on this.

The chapters are sharp and cut straight to the point while also managing to be entertaining and enjoyable. The advice and tips in this book are logical and are backed up with the author's own personal experience.

Even if you're not a writer, I would still recommend this book, because it's a humorous read and if you ever need to give advice to budding writers this is the perfect book. Every chapter captures the struggles in that particular area, the mistakes that are made and how to avoid them. The technical skills are perfect and the formatting is clear and easy on the eyes.

Rebecca clearly knows what she's doing and I would recommend this book to anyone. Excited for chapter 8!!!

A love Never Meant To Be

This was a wonderful story, I only read the first 6 chapters but it was entertaining and I really enjoyed it. The chapters are short and to the point which was nice. The plot was interesting and the characters amusing.

If I have any critiques, the story could use a bit more editing and the sentence and paragraph structures, as well as the formatting, could be adjusted.

Aside from that, it was a wonderful story! Keep writing!

The New Me

Great Story!

Although only 2 chapters written, the plot has potential and the storyline appears intriguing. There are a few grammar mistakes and I would recommend some editing with the formatting as in some places the dialogue is clumped and confusing, but other than that, I have no complaints about this book. It's a compelling story filled with potential. I look forward to reading the full story when it's finished.

Great job!

An Incomplete Love Story

A story revolving around 3 best friends. 2 of which fell in love, but their love story never concluded and was left incomplete instead. The way Chiya wrote this story leaves you interested and thirsting for more. What happened to the other friend? Why was the love story incomplete? What happened between these best friends? So many questions left unanswered. This story seems like a tragedy. It's only the first chapter at this point, but it's already very good. I would recommend this to anyone looking for what seems to be an ill-fated love story.

Amazing job with this story! I need to know what happens next. Please, please, update soon!!! 😊

Beautifully Poignant

This was a short, simplistic story but was absolutely amazing and filled with raw emotions. I really enjoyed it. The author did amazing with the characters and the writing style. There were no grammar mistakes and the story itself was interesting to read. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone.

The family

This is a great book. It started out seeming cliched but was hilarious so I stuck with it and by the second chapter I loved it!!! The main character was realistic and the story humours and fast-paced which I really enjoyed. Aside from some technical mistakes which interrupted me as I was reading, this was a highly entertaining story, and I can't wait for new updates!! The author did a great job with it!

Rising Tide

As far as vampire stories go, this one was an original and I enjoyed it. I enjoyed it so much, this is my third time reading this novel. Looking for vampires but want something a bit different? Then this book is for you! Can't wait to read the rest of the books in the series!!

An Entertaining Read

I loved it!! Of all the books I've read on Inkiit, this one is probably my favourite. Every chapter had me laughing. The main character is a humorous and interesting yet somewhat relatable person. The storyline is absolutely gripping. I'm actually impatient for the next updates.

I noticed to convey the tones or moods in certain scenes the author used emojis. Traditionally, you wouldn't see a book using emojis in that manner, and some would argue it's an incorrect usage of emojis during a story. However, the beauty in writing your own novel is you can do whatever you want with it, regardless of rules. And I think adding the emojis was a perfect addition to the story. Because of the emojis, the reader had a clearer understanding of the mc's feelings during a particular scene/moment. This added to the overall enjoyment and pleasure of reading this book.

If I have any critiques, it's the fact the grammar could use some improvement. Due to grammar errors, the flow of the story was interrupted. Other than this, I have no complaints.

I thoroughly loved and enjoyed this Novel. I would definitely recommend it to anyone searching for a fun light-hearted, enjoyable read.

Please update soon and often :)

Avengers!!

This story is great for Avenger fans. It's ongoing and the story is written in a way, that the reader is the one living the story. As a result, it's very interactive and that makes it so delightful and exciting to read. If there is anything I would suggest fixing, that would be the paragraph structure. It's too long, and that makes it a bit difficult to read and concentrate on the story. Try breaking them up into smaller paragraphs and alternate them, so if the last one u wrote was long, make the next paragr[h shorter. That will significantly improve the flow and readability of ur story. Otherwise, it's really enjoyable, so don't give up on it. Looking forward to updates!! ❤❤

Captivating

I was hooked. The story was a bit too wordy, and took a bit of concentration to follow, but overall, I enjoyed it. I'm very excited and can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome job!