Adrienn_B

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Hi,
I was truly captivated by your story, which is why I felt compelled to share something that repeatedly pulled me out of its otherwise mystical and magical flow—and ultimately diminished the experience for me.
While the story is, of course, yours, a reader’s imagination plays a crucial role in the enjoyment of the worlds, characters, and moments you describe. Your writing led me to imagine beings that were otherworldly and powerful. However, the images you included disrupted that vision rather than enhanced it. Instead of reinforcing the mystique, they grounded the characters in a very ordinary reality.
Although the people in the images are attractive, they appear quite conventional—bleached hair, familiar looks, and features we encounter daily. In contrast, your descriptions led me to envision tall, muscular, broad-shouldered figures with distinctive, striking features—characters that felt real, yet extraordinary. Seeing AI-generated images resembling the countless faces we see on YouTube made them feel generic rather than magical.
If this were my story, I would choose to remove the images altogether. I suspect they may appeal more to younger readers, whereas more experienced readers like us often prefer the freedom to let imagination do the work—especially when the writing itself is strong enough to carry that magic.
Kind regards,

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