Aerith

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Lovely Priness/Pauper Story

I enjoyed every moment I spent reading this. From the first chapter, I was instantly pulled into the well-constructed world of these kingdoms. The societal classes and the surrounding areas were explained easily. The characters were all colorful and had well-written personalities that pulled me in even more than the plot. I'm a sucker for fairytale-esque stories, but Simple Servant is probably one of the best I have read.

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Amazing Find

I'm new to this site and this is the first story I've read on here, and let me just say, it was amazing. I read all 60 chapters within less than 48 hours.

The story just flows out of the computer screen. It's easy to read, easy to follow, and the pacing of the plot is brilliant. If you are a fan of the Kingdom Hearts Universe, this is definitely a great read. The author captures the essence of Kingdom Hearts and stays true to all of the characters personalities, for the most part. There were only a few moments in the story that I felt were a bit jarring, but they are barely noticeable in the grand scheme of things.

As far as the writing goes, the author is very accomplished. I have never read such a well-written fanfiction. Usually, I find really descriptive action scenes to be boring and hard to read, but the author navigated through those very well and frequently. There was never a dull moment for me. I also usually don't like original characters created for fanfiction, but her created characters did not take away from the already established world. They enhanced it very well. I also appreciated the author's genius in the explanations about the Unversed and the way Kingdom Hearts and all of its plot lines were expertly woven together to center around Kairi.

Great read.

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Amazing read!

I read this in one day, because once I started I could not stop. The story is extremely captivating and well-written. The characters are believable and her use of greek/roman mythology enriches the plot, though it is obviously tweaked for the sake of the story it still works really well. If you're into adventure/romances this is definitely a novel you should check out.

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Great Read

This story has all the elements of a captivating drama, a cute romance, and political intrigue. I thoroughly enjoyed being immersed in this world, while the details of what governs the world still confuse me and there are many elements that are revealed, I felt the descriptions were enough to paint a picture in my mind. The tale of two people in an arranged marriage can easily turn into a cliche, but I feel this one was more than that. It is easy to see there is much more behind the characters than what is written and I enjoyed watching them develop as the story progressed.

I would definitely recommend giving this a read!

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