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Best Scifi Read.

Wooow I really love this Novel. Time you did a great job and keep up the good work.

Pack with emotion, and drama. You'll get attached to the characters instantly. And now I want to know whats next. This last update had me on the verge of tears 😢. I can't wait for more.

If you enjoy Aurora Rising. You will enjoy this even more. This book has the sci-fi, and drama. The plot is great and is only building.

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Just what I needed!!

SHE DID IT AGAIN!!! Created to be a short fun read this story has everything you need. The humor, the plot, and of course the bed rocking scenes that make you want to read it over again. I expected nothing less than amazing from Eliyang!! So yes...SHE DID IT AGAIN!! Another amazing story great job🌙💜

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Great story. Awesome plot💯

This was a great read and you did a fantastic job author💯💯👏👏

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HOOKED AND CAPTURED

This is an amazing read and I am enjoying myself. I'm half way through and I keep thinking to myself damn I don't want this to end yet. But the author has more books to this series and I can't wait to read them. The main character is strong and fierce. (My favorite) Honestly you won't want to put this down. GREAT JOB STORMIE.

Now I must resume reading🤣🤣

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Check this out.

Great story so far. Fire 🔥 is a boss and I love it. I love that you gave us a background to your world both werewolf and vampire. I implore you to keep writing your doing an amazing job.

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Check this out!!

Oh I can't wait for more. Great story and I love the plot and connections. The characters are fantastic. Looking forward to the next update.😆

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Hauntingly good read.

Tis a spooky book this was.

Wow this was a great read. I myself would never be in Charlie's situation.

There were very few grammar issues. Like I said in the comments. You should go back and shorten up those paragraphs. Also conversations should be separated. Its just easier to read that way.

But if this your writing style I'm cool if your 😎.

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Awesome story

Great job i can't wait for your next update.

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First time.

This is my first time reading a horror book. Well....other than goosebumps. But that was a long time ago. I enjoyed reading this book. It kept me intrigued. The plot was great, and the characters were fantastic. You did a great job writing this book. There are a few grammatical errors, but we're human. Those are easy fixes—great job writing The Dog.

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Great simple story.

I like this story. it was easy to read and the plot was quick and simple.

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Finished in one day.

The author never fails me. I really enjoyed this book thank you for sharing.

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Great story

Great job.

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Consorts Pride.

The first page of this book caught my attention. It was refreshing to read a new original story. The author laid it out well to understand the world they created. There were a few grammar errors but other than that it was a good read. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

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Amazing Read.

This book was different and exciting. I loom forward to reading more books by this talented author.

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Capturing Story.

This story had a good amount of emotion. I liked the progression of the story it was not to drawn out but there was enough to know the characters.

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Loved this so so much. Can't wait for more.

Such a wonderful series. I can't wait to continue. You did such an amazing job.

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On to book 3

Pack full of emotion and awesome scenes. I love the characters and the refreshing plot with an amazing class of Supernaturals

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AWESOME on to book 2

This is a a great read. I'm already moving to the next. Great job author.

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Great story

Great job.

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SPICY AND ADDICTIVE

This story had it all. Emotions, a great story line and SPICE!!!

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AMAZING READ!!!!!

When I tell you this book was truly amazing. Amply what I just said by a 100000. Loved it so so much. I love ling stories and love that each chapter entrances you to read more. Oh goodness there are so many parts to this story that I loved if I list them all here it would be next year. So to sum up my feelings I will say this instead. I LOVED THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!

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Loved it

I really enjoyed this. The pace was great and I love the characters.

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Great job

I really enjoyed this story the pace was great and the plat was fantastic.

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Sooooooo Goooooood!

Oh so great I loved your stories thank you so so much you are so amazing.

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Love it excited to read book 2!!

Great job.

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Great story

I loved this so so much I just had to finish the same day. The plot is well thought out and the characters are amazing. The author did an amazing job

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I enjoyed.

Great read, pace, and story line.

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Love it.

This book is well thought out and I love the story line and plot. I can't wait to read the next book.

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Fun quick read

Great story

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Loved it

Great fun read💜

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Amazing read

Oh how I love this author and the amazing stories your write. I loved Amaris and I love Caleb just as much. I can't wait to read what you have next. Keep up the good work.

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Great story

Great job🥰

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You won't put it down!!

This was a great read I couldn't put it down. SO MANY EMOTIONS!! Such great characters. You did a fantastic job 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Loved it can’t wait for more

Great story that captures your imagination😊😊

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Great action.

There are only two chapters to this so far. But I know it will be great going forward. Great job💜

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Fun read with great characters

This is a fun read. I love the character dialog and the diversity of the characters. The descriptions are great and I love everyone's personality.(Except Inu...I don't like her🤣🤣🤣.) Great job author👏👏👏

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FUN Quick read

This was a quick read, but fun. I was confused with the age in the beginning. But later learned. Great job💜

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Great Read

It's great beginning to an awesome story. I LOVE that the author gives the POV from both main characters. Looking forward to reading more.💜

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Great read

The plot was great and I loved the humor in it even though its horror.

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FUN READ waiting for updates.

This was a fun read so far. The characters are full of personality. Ready for the next update.

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Interesting read. LOTS of potential

This story is heading in the right direction. The plot and the mystery is building up. I encourage you to finish writing. Great job, and thanks for sharing your story.😊

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Awesome read cant wait for the update

Wow this is great so far. I'm already connected to the characters. Can't wait for the next update 😍

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READ THIS ISH. IT'S AMAZING🥰🥰

Such an awesome story. I just had to finish it, I loved it great job. For one I love the plot and had some love hate love relationships with the characters. I've been craving a book like this for awhile now. Thank you so much 🥰

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👏👏 What a great book.👏👏

I Enjoyed reading this book. There was great detail and and the plot was amazing. Maybe I shoud become a 🕵️‍♂️ lol. love fantasy and although this wasn't my preferred genre it was an amazing read. I just finished this book and now I can take my burning rice off the stove. I got so distracted 😆 🤣 Great job Nia💜

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What a great story.

First off I still want to fight the sister💯👊👊. The plot is great and I love the characters. Your doing a great job. I really enjoyed your story.

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FRESH AND DIFFERENT. GREAT PLOT.

This book has a great start. The plot already had me captured. To see the world from the prospective of a baby is something new. I do have some critiques though.

Although I gave you 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ you really need to work on your grammar and your sentence structure. I gave you this rating because I would never knock a writer who just beginning to write.

My advice would be to study 📖 other peoples writings. 🛑DO NOT PLAGIARIZE🛑. By reading other novels you'll get a sense of how grammar should be used and how sentences should be formed.

You have a great plot. I can see this going places. But reading this can take away from the awesomeness of it. Only because of the grammar, and sentence structure. If you need any more advice leave a message on my wall.😆

- Aierodesa🌙

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Great read with an awesome twist and a great message.

This was a great book. It was well written and I had fun reading it. Without giving out any spoilers I will say this. The book has a great message, and I learned a lot. Great 👍 job.

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Loved it

I really enjoyed this story.

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Awesome

I love this story. It was a fast fun read.

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Quick read

Fun and quick

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I can't wait for the update.

I can't wait for the next update. But I will I know it will be awesome. Great job by the way.

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Great story. I'm hooked

This story is very entertaining. To begin the characters are unique both personality wise and descriptions. The author is very good at detailing scenes and I just love that we aren't stuck in one place. If you love a good story and a lot of reading material I recommend this book. Great job.

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LOVE IT!

My my my. I love the book, Maya. Great job, I couldn't put it down.

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Awesome book

Thos book had me begging for a happy ending. Luckily there are two other books after this. I can't wai t to see what happens

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Great read

💘 love love love this book. It made me laugh, CRY, double take. I was happy, sad, 😠 and then 😊 again.

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LOVE LOVE LOVE

I read this book a few months back. It was 👍 I wanted to come back and leave a review.

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Great book

Love the story. I like the mystery aspect

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Cute fun story.

THANK YOU!

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Quick fun read

I like this story. It was interesting and fun to read.

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Loved it.

Really enjoyed this book. On to number two!!

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Can't wait for more

I started reading this book a few months back. I'll be patient and wait for more. Great job.

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I enjoyed this.

I love this story. Its original different than a lot of werewolf books. I love how you opened up a new plot without starting a whole new story.

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I love that it's different

I like how this novel jumps right into the story. I think it's impressive what Impact women have in this dystopian society. I mean, they're using lanterns. I guess the guys should call Thomas Edison and get some advice. This whole layout shows how much power a woman could have over men. If the men weren't such brutes, kidnapping, and selling women. I'm happy to know Emilia has Jonah to protect her.

I hoped that Emilia would be a little stronger when she first got captured and not as submissive. I can understand why she kept quiet, though, trying to protect herself from any unnecessary harm. I'm wondering if she'll try to make it back to her own time (if there is a way) or will she stay with her mate.

This is a great novel, it's different, and I enjoy different, especially when it involves werewolves. Everything is so generic and repetitive. I can't wait to read more keep up the excellent work.

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I couldn't put it down!

I really enjoyed reading this book. I knew it would be hard to put down. In fact, I started reading this at ten in the morning and finished it around midnight. The plot of this story was clear, and the characters are very special to me. I love their personality. There is so much life is in this book. I love to read, and very few books can make me cry, laughs, basically an emotional roller coaster. So congratulations AlessaBarnes, as far as I'm concerned, you're on my bookshelf along with Sarah J Maas and Jennifer Armentrout.

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