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Creative Novel

This novel has a great plot so far. I love that the storyline picked up in the beginning. I would suggest you spread out some of the main points in chapters. Instead of feeding us all the main points at once, expand and elaborate on one or maybe two points (If they coincide) at a time. By doing this, we get more details, and you increase the longevity of your novel.

Also, (Just a suggestion) take some time and go back through for grammar and punctuation. I’m not going to knock down a star for this because at least you tried. It’s there, but it just needs to be cleaned up. Great punctuation and grammar will keep your readers attention on the actual story and not on simple, easy to fix mistakes.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this so far. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity, and I hope to see more soon.

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I love that it's different

I like how this novel jumps right into the story. I think it's impressive what Impact women have in this dystopian society. I mean, they're using lanterns. I guess the guys should call Thomas Edison and get some advice. This whole layout shows how much power a woman could have over men. If the men weren't such brutes, kidnapping, and selling women. I'm happy to know Emilia has Jonah to protect her.

I hoped that Emilia would be a little stronger when she first got captured and not as submissive. I can understand why she kept quiet, though, trying to protect herself from any unnecessary harm. I'm wondering if she'll try to make it back to her own time (if there is a way) or will she stay with her mate.

This is a great novel, it's different, and I enjoy different, especially when it involves werewolves. Everything is so generic and repetitive. I can't wait to read more keep up the excellent work.

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I couldn't put it down!

I really enjoyed reading this book. I knew it would be hard to put down. In fact, I started reading this at ten in the morning and finished it around midnight. The plot of this story was clear, and the characters are very special to me. I love their personality. There is so much life is in this book. I love to read, and very few books can make me cry, laughs, basically an emotional roller coaster. So congratulations AlessaBarnes, as far as I'm concerned, you're on my bookshelf along with Sarah J Maas and Jennifer Armentrout.

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