Aierodesa🌙

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Great read with great perspective.

This was a different read for me. I enjoyed this novel and I love seeing the diversity. This twist and turns. The drama it was everything. Great job🤘

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Great story. Awesome plot💯

This was a great read and you did a fantastic job author💯💯👏👏

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Great story fun plot

Fun story and I can't wait for the next update 😊

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Human characters.

This is a great piece. The characters are human and not the typical everything's perfect fiction character. The chapters could be longer though. Overall great job and continue writing.

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HOOKED AND CAPTURED

This is an amazing read and I am enjoying myself. I'm half way through and I keep thinking to myself damn I don't want this to end yet. But the author has more books to this series and I can't wait to read them. The main character is strong and fierce. (My favorite) Honestly you won't want to put this down. GREAT JOB STORMIE.

Now I must resume reading🤣🤣

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Check this out.

Great story so far. Fire 🔥 is a boss and I love it. I love that you gave us a background to your world both werewolf and vampire. I implore you to keep writing your doing an amazing job.

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Check this out!!

Oh I can't wait for more. Great story and I love the plot and connections. The characters are fantastic. Looking forward to the next update.😆

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Best Scifi Read.

Wooow I really love this Novel. Time you did a great job and keep up the good work.

Pack with emotion, and drama. You'll get attached to the characters instantly. And now I want to know whats next. This last update had me on the verge of tears 😢. I can't wait for more.

If you enjoy Aurora Rising. You will enjoy this even more. This book has the sci-fi, and drama. The plot is great and is only building.

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Hauntingly good read.

Tis a spooky book this was.

Wow this was a great read. I myself would never be in Charlie's situation.

There were very few grammar issues. Like I said in the comments. You should go back and shorten up those paragraphs. Also conversations should be separated. Its just easier to read that way.

But if this your writing style I'm cool if your 😎.

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Great read. WARNING YOU WILL CRY

I loved this book so much. Anybody that makes me cry is a good book. That means I got attached to the characters,and their story. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

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Awesome story

Great job i can't wait for your next update.

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First time.

This is my first time reading a horror book. Well....other than goosebumps. But that was a long time ago. I enjoyed reading this book. It kept me intrigued. The plot was great, and the characters were fantastic. You did a great job writing this book. There are a few grammatical errors, but we're human. Those are easy fixes—great job writing The Dog.

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Great simple story.

I like this story. it was easy to read and the plot was quick and simple.

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Creative Novel

This novel has a great plot so far. I love that the storyline picked up in the beginning. I would suggest you spread out some of the main points in chapters. Instead of feeding us all the main points at once, expand and elaborate on one or maybe two points (If they coincide) at a time. By doing this, we get more details, and you increase the longevity of your novel.

Also, (Just a suggestion) take some time and go back through for grammar and punctuation. I’m not going to knock down a star for this because at least you tried. It’s there, but it just needs to be cleaned up. Great punctuation and grammar will keep your readers attention on the actual story and not on simple, easy to fix mistakes.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this so far. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity, and I hope to see more soon.

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Great speed. And aweso.e read

I enjoyed this story. The author did a great job. Keep up the good work.

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Fun quick read

Great story

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Loved it had to finish it.

This was a great story so many twist and turns. Great characters awesome plot.

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Loved it

Great fun read💜

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Amazing read

Oh how I love this author and the amazing stories your write. I loved Amaris and I love Caleb just as much. I can't wait to read what you have next. Keep up the good work.

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WONDERFUL READ💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Oh wow I loved this so so much. I couldn't stop reading it to function in my everyday life. I laugh I cried I threw my phone a few times.....and then I laughed and cried again.

I loved everything. And I love how I got so attached to theses characters. From beginning to end this was a fun refreshing read.

Author you did a GREAT JOB 👍 👏 😀 👌 ❤.

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Great story

Great job🥰

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You won't put it down!!

This was a great read I couldn't put it down. SO MANY EMOTIONS!! Such great characters. You did a fantastic job 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Loved it can’t wait for more

Great story that captures your imagination😊😊

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Great Start

This story is great. I was a little confused by the different names for the main character. So I had to go back a read it over. Other than that I recommend it. Great job💜

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Great action.

There are only two chapters to this so far. But I know it will be great going forward. Great job💜

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Fun Imagination

I'm not a big fan of fanfiction. But I do love Harry Potter so this was a fun read. I could see everything in my mind. Great job author😊😊

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Exciting story

The author has an amazing idea for this plot. Automatically you'll want to know what happens next. I recommend going back and fixing the grammar because it takes away from the reading experience. Other than that great job and continue writing.😊

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Fun read with great characters

This is a fun read. I love the character dialog and the diversity of the characters. The descriptions are great and I love everyone's personality.(Except Inu...I don't like her🤣🤣🤣.) Great job author👏👏👏

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FUN Quick read

This was a quick read, but fun. I was confused with the age in the beginning. But later learned. Great job💜

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Great Start.

So far this is a great read.👏👏👏 I will keep it in my library to see how the story progresses. We begin with Alex and Gabby at a party. But I wish we knew how they ended up at said party. Some backstory to that would be awesome.

The author is using past and present. So pay attention to the header so there is no confusion. We jump right in after the that. I personally need an attachment to the characters in the beginning. Especially for situations like Alex's. She's quiet, and a bookworm. (Like me🤣🤣) The story is told from the narrators POV. So, we have to base emotions off of Dialog.

Your writing style is your own. But, I do suggest you use grammarly to fix the issues. (I use the free trial😆). Mainly for the punctuation. There are so many comas at the end of the dialog sentences. - and : aren't really needed in some places. Also there is an over use of the word she. You can use your main characters name in place of that sometimes. (Just a suggestion though.) 💜

KEEP IT UP. 💯 👌 😌

I can't wait to read more.🌙

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Great Read

It's great beginning to an awesome story. I LOVE that the author gives the POV from both main characters. Looking forward to reading more.💜

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Great read

The plot was great and I loved the humor in it even though its horror.

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FUN READ waiting for updates.

This was a fun read so far. The characters are full of personality. Ready for the next update.

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Interesting read. LOTS of potential

This story is heading in the right direction. The plot and the mystery is building up. I encourage you to finish writing. Great job, and thanks for sharing your story.😊

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Awesome read cant wait for the update

Wow this is great so far. I'm already connected to the characters. Can't wait for the next update 😍

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READ THIS ISH. IT'S AMAZING🥰🥰

Such an awesome story. I just had to finish it, I loved it great job. For one I love the plot and had some love hate love relationships with the characters. I've been craving a book like this for awhile now. Thank you so much 🥰

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Great Potential 👍

I can't wait to read more. I can see this heading in a great direction tbe plot is going to be 🔥🔥🔥🔥.

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👏👏 What a great book.👏👏

I Enjoyed reading this book. There was great detail and and the plot was amazing. Maybe I shoud become a 🕵️‍♂️ lol. love fantasy and although this wasn't my preferred genre it was an amazing read. I just finished this book and now I can take my burning rice off the stove. I got so distracted 😆 🤣 Great job Nia💜

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What a great story.

First off I still want to fight the sister💯👊👊. The plot is great and I love the characters. Your doing a great job. I really enjoyed your story.

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FRESH AND DIFFERENT. GREAT PLOT.

This book has a great start. The plot already had me captured. To see the world from the prospective of a baby is something new. I do have some critiques though.

Although I gave you 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ you really need to work on your grammar and your sentence structure. I gave you this rating because I would never knock a writer who just beginning to write.

My advice would be to study 📖 other peoples writings. 🛑DO NOT PLAGIARIZE🛑. By reading other novels you'll get a sense of how grammar should be used and how sentences should be formed.

You have a great plot. I can see this going places. But reading this can take away from the awesomeness of it. Only because of the grammar, and sentence structure. If you need any more advice leave a message on my wall.😆

- Aierodesa🌙

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Great read with an awesome twist and a great message.

This was a great book. It was well written and I had fun reading it. Without giving out any spoilers I will say this. The book has a great message, and I learned a lot. Great 👍 job.

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Loved it

I really enjoyed this story.

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Awesome

I love this story. It was a fast fun read.

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Wolf not Wolf

Wolf not Wolf has a great plot. And it an awesome story to read. The author does a great job in leading into the the story, building up to the climax, and then ending with great chapter. To the author I love that you wrote you own story. My only critique for you would be to ge back through and edit the spelling and grammar.

If you want more advice from me feel free to ask me on my wall. Your book was great and I enjoyed reading it.

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Quick read

Fun and quick

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I can't wait for the update.

I can't wait for the next update. But I will I know it will be awesome. Great job by the way.

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Great story. I'm hooked

This story is very entertaining. To begin the characters are unique both personality wise and descriptions. The author is very good at detailing scenes and I just love that we aren't stuck in one place. If you love a good story and a lot of reading material I recommend this book. Great job.

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LOVE IT!

My my my. I love the book, Maya. Great job, I couldn't put it down.

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Awesome book

Thos book had me begging for a happy ending. Luckily there are two other books after this. I can't wai t to see what happens

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Great read

💘 love love love this book. It made me laugh, CRY, double take. I was happy, sad, 😠 and then 😊 again.

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Loved it

Great short story. I really enjoyed it

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LOVE LOVE LOVE

I read this book a few months back. It was 👍 I wanted to come back and leave a review.

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Great book

Love the story. I like the mystery aspect

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Cute fun story.

THANK YOU!

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Quick fun read

I like this story. It was interesting and fun to read.

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Loved it.

Really enjoyed this book. On to number two!!

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Can't wait for more

I started reading this book a few months back. I'll be patient and wait for more. Great job.

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I enjoyed this.

I love this story. Its original different than a lot of werewolf books. I love how you opened up a new plot without starting a whole new story.

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Great Detail Story

I enjoyed this story. The details were great, and the characters are fantastic. I know that you put a lot of thought and work into this, and I applaud you for that. I love reading, so the long chapters were great, and the "detail dump" well that didn't bother me. Thanks again for writing this fantastic read.

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I love that it's different

I like how this novel jumps right into the story. I think it's impressive what Impact women have in this dystopian society. I mean, they're using lanterns. I guess the guys should call Thomas Edison and get some advice. This whole layout shows how much power a woman could have over men. If the men weren't such brutes, kidnapping, and selling women. I'm happy to know Emilia has Jonah to protect her.

I hoped that Emilia would be a little stronger when she first got captured and not as submissive. I can understand why she kept quiet, though, trying to protect herself from any unnecessary harm. I'm wondering if she'll try to make it back to her own time (if there is a way) or will she stay with her mate.

This is a great novel, it's different, and I enjoy different, especially when it involves werewolves. Everything is so generic and repetitive. I can't wait to read more keep up the excellent work.

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I couldn't put it down!

I really enjoyed reading this book. I knew it would be hard to put down. In fact, I started reading this at ten in the morning and finished it around midnight. The plot of this story was clear, and the characters are very special to me. I love their personality. There is so much life is in this book. I love to read, and very few books can make me cry, laughs, basically an emotional roller coaster. So congratulations AlessaBarnes, as far as I'm concerned, you're on my bookshelf along with Sarah J Maas and Jennifer Armentrout.

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