Alarica Black

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I have fallen in love

This is one of the few romance books that have demanded my full attention from the start to the very end. It is amazing and worth reading.

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Love the book

The book is overall great! I love the creativity, originality and how the title itself reels you in, but i feel like the author should delve deeper into both the characters' personality for example -thoughts and overall emotions- i mean surely the girl feels that she has no choice and maybe if was already in love with someone else, we could see the transition of feelings, her beginning to love Master Hein. This story has so much potential. I feel like the characters would be a bit more interesting and complex with some inner turmoil, doubt and plot twists. Some terrible situation where the characters should choose and let the readers know more about them would be great! It helps a lot with character development. I hope the author continues to write more stories like this.

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